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Tired_RegressorLv411mth
2024-05-28 07:40

This is honestly a good story. But seeing the protagonist get constantly compared to everyone else and the people always highlighting his weak points is really tiring to see. It's understandable if it was the first impression, or before he was making waves in Dorne with his groundbreaking ideas that were being implemented. But why does it need to be repeated everytime that he is not the most handsome among his friends? He is not the most strongest? He is not that good in bed?? It's just annoying to see at this point. The worst part is, the people that keep on highlighting his weakness and lesser traits are his family. If it isn't something that is particularly important for the story, such as progression of romance with his future queen or something else. I think it's better not to keep on repeating the same thing.

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