Come on, how can we start writing this story? This was certainly a big surprise for me, I didn't particularly have high expectations for this story, you know, prejudice against Martel's, so despite having it saved in the library for a long time, I never bothered to read it, until recently..... I say with absolute certainty that it easily enters my current top 5 of the best stories I've ever read here, but without further ado, I'll point out each classification to better illustrate what I think..... Lets go :D ==== Translation Quality 5/5: To be honest, English is not my first language, so I can't judge completely here, but everything is written in a way that I can easily understand, so that makes it great for me. . Stability of Updates 3/5: Well, I can say that this is one of the few weaknesses of this story, its updates are very inconsistent, we don't necessarily need a high frequency of posts, but if there was a clear schedule of when they would occur, it would be great. . Story Development 5/5: This is a point that pleases me and not at the same time, we can see the light at the end of the tunnel, we have an idea of where some things are heading, but almost always in the middle of something important something happens or the rhythm changes because for some reason and this ends up breaking the reading rhythm a little, which is frustrating, but I wouldn't say it becomes a big problem to the point of really slowing down any point. . Character Design 5/5: This point for me was a little ambiguous at first, I was unsure if the person who took over the MC's body was really someone who knew the plot of GOT or just someone good at going with the flow and adapting while taking advantage of the situation, but I learned to like it. From him, I fear someone who is intelligent, insightful, stupid and relaxed in just the right way most of the time. We watch the main character's progress and learn to like him and I dare say we even understand him lol. The development of the other characters in the story is also very good, some surprise me and others are exactly as I would imagine, I wouldn't do anything different. They were all very well done. . World Background 5/5: We are working with GOT, an extremely complex world where several things occur at the same time, I believe that it was well worked on here, everything is well described, we have different points of view being used without leaving many holes.
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