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GrimReeFer
GrimReeFerLv112mth
2024-04-05 08:53

The MC is mentally unwell, like Schizophrenia levels of unwell, its ment to be something to do with comedy, I guess? but my mother suffered from Schizophrenia, so I know a little of this subject, the MC is simply a physiopath, he just goes around killing people. Idk how it's fun to read about someone that , should clearly be Put In a mental hospital.

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Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

it's not completely correct, but it's not completely wrong either, at the start the mc's mental state was quite bad

GrimReeFer
GrimReeFerLv1

Start? I read till nearly 50 and it was still the same.

Mysteryon:it's not completely correct, but it's not completely wrong either, at the start the mc's mental state was quite bad
Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

he begins character development in the grand line

GrimReeFer:Start? I read till nearly 50 and it was still the same.
Aaden_
Aaden_Lv3

thats good and all, but u kinda killing the chances of people reading the story that far.

Mysteryon:he begins character development in the grand line
Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

just translating 🙃, I've done my best to remove the china numba one stuff

Aaden_:thats good and all, but u kinda killing the chances of people reading the story that far.
GrimReeFer
GrimReeFerLv1

You should just turn it into a fanfic at this point and remove all the trash.

Mysteryon:just translating 🙃, I've done my best to remove the china numba one stuff
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Lo guardé pensando que era un fic normal , no mtl

Mysteryon:just translating 🙃, I've done my best to remove the china numba one stuff
Miki_SW
Miki_SWLv4

honestly I might read it just for that I mean have you read the psychopaths harem this is proxy not that much compared to it in terms of darkness

RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

raw name?

Mysteryon:just translating 🙃, I've done my best to remove the china numba one stuff
Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

Pirate, I use the barrier fruit to open susanoo

RegalObscure:raw name?
RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

Thank you.

Mysteryon:Pirate, I use the barrier fruit to open susanoo
RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

OMG to understand that MTL one has to be Dao Ancestor in the Dao of MTL. My brain melted 🫠. Now I am the screaming lady and MTL is the cat.

Mysteryon:Pirate, I use the barrier fruit to open susanoo
Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

indeed

RegalObscure:OMG to understand that MTL one has to be Dao Ancestor in the Dao of MTL. My brain melted 🫠. Now I am the screaming lady and MTL is the cat.
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