Item: HP: Bad Intentions
Rating: 2.4
Author: lectorviciado

lectorviciadoLv11mth

2024-11-04 04:55

maliiiiiiiiiisima traducion palabras totalmente diferentes y a ratos se vuelve inposible de comprender la continuidad

HP: Bad Intentions

Max1mus

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Hey guys, Max1mus here! Here is my shameless Author Review. I have tried my best to enhance the reader experience of this translation work. Hope you have a good time reading it. If you do or don't leave a review either way. Also if you have questions about the novel you could comment under this review and I will gladly answer.

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Good fanfic, but bad translation. Don't get me wrong, the translation and grammar is understandable. The problem is that this fanfic use vague words for names, skills, items and etc. For example "invisible monster"... Even now I have no clue what kind of monster is that... Just give it a name... The same problem happens everytime some sort of name is used...

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Jajajaajaajajj,Esa sipnosis me gano,ojalá la historia sea igual de buena ............................. ................................... ..... ........

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