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2024-05-31 09:39

I really really love this story is what I'll say first lol. I really enjoyed the interaction between Ravin Arlen, they're just so very cute. Tho they started out so awkwardly lol hahaI remember the second-hand embarrassment cause me to stop reading for an hour lol). They begin to care for each other, feeding each or cooking each other and needing each other presences. Their relationship is just so cute, I'm really looking forward to how it blooms🥰🥰🥰 The parental relationship between Ravi n Little Ash(Asher) is also very very cute and warm. Ravi thinks he's not good enough n Asher thinks he's a bother, it's sadly cute. Hopefully they can heal each other with their individual trauma. I wanna scream that both of them are enough and is a blessing to have around, and not a bother.😭🥰😭🥰 The unique relationship with their neighbors, Malik, Sage n Lana is interesting as well. Malik being a senior that guides Ravi n Asher. Sage n Asher being friends(probably partners in crimes in the future lol(not actual crimes hehe)) Lana being the annoying but smart aunt that tutors and bodyguards Asher. Their relationship is just so funny and interesting and somewhat heartwarming too.🥰🤣🥰🤣 I pray that the mc n the other characters(n the author) can find happiness, peace and loven money lol)🍀 P.S hopefully we can see more of the M side of Ravi n Arlen's love hehe(I want a Ravi riding it scene 👀👀👀hehehe)

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I'm currently on chapter 233 and just realized I haven't written a review yet! So the gist of it is: I love this novel ❤ - It's well written. from the first sentence of the first chapter, I knew I was gonna like this. And the more I read, the more I enjoyed myself, I even found myself laughing out loud on several occasions. - The story is a perfect blend between funny, heartwarming, slice of life moments and serious, darker aspects. Because the MCs work in a police station, we accompany them on their various ongoing investigations and I looove those. The cases are really well made and give a depth to the story, they enrich it and keep it from getting dull. - The characters are another solid point of this novel. I fell in love with Ravi, the MC, from day one but who knew there would be so many other lovable characters? Asher, Arlen and Malik being the first ones that come to mind but also Lana, Sage, all the police coworkers and I'm even super curious about Anouk and Alya (and the Sentinels), I hope the author will show more of them as we progress in the story. - The world background is interesting. It is a version of Earth so it's familiar to the reader and makes immersion easy but it's made more interesting by the addition of Heroes, Villains and Nests. However, for now those three aspects were only lightly touched upon, It would be great to know more about them in the future. - The Updating Stability is on the slower side, but I understand that some authors have busy schedules and daily lives, I only hope the book doesn't get dropped midway. Please author, do not drop your novel.

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