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9 Chapters in and there's some good potential here. Characterization is strong and the situation unfolds understandably well and within a logical set of goals. Actions can be a bit confusing at times but nothing a solid editing session won't fix. Writing quality is the biggest detractor for me, and can use a good editing pass for clarity and polish. There was a lot of emphasis on Show but too little Tell for me to entirely understand what the situation of the world was. That said, it's also pretty early into the plot so establishing the characters is clearly where the author is at as of this review. Keep up the good work!

This is genuinely my favorite novel on the platform. It’s so wholesome with the romance and the action plots are solid.

This is a really good story. It started out a little shaky so it took a second for me to get into it, but once I did I couldn’t stop. It kind of gives me tv show vibes and I love it. This book has found family, romance, action, powers, and a crazy background that’s very well thought out. The plot is keeping me here and I don’t think I’m going anywhere. It’s just too good and too many mysteries and turns and twists. I feel like I’m not describing this well but I would say give this book a shot if your considering it you won’t regret it!

I really like this story, the metaphors are very interesting and fit the plot perfectly! The rhythm of the story is also very suitable, and the story is very strong! I highly recommend everyone to read this story, and I’m very much looking forward to the rest of the story! The background of the story is also very detailed, like creating a new world.

I'm currently on chapter 233 and just realized I haven't written a review yet! So the gist of it is: I love this novel ❤ - It's well written. from the first sentence of the first chapter, I knew I was gonna like this. And the more I read, the more I enjoyed myself, I even found myself laughing out loud on several occasions. - The story is a perfect blend between funny, heartwarming, slice of life moments and serious, darker aspects. Because the MCs work in a police station, we accompany them on their various ongoing investigations and I looove those. The cases are really well made and give a depth to the story, they enrich it and keep it from getting dull. - The characters are another solid point of this novel. I fell in love with Ravi, the MC, from day one but who knew there would be so many other lovable characters? Asher, Arlen and Malik being the first ones that come to mind but also Lana, Sage, all the police coworkers and I'm even super curious about Anouk and Alya (and the Sentinels), I hope the author will show more of them as we progress in the story. - The world background is interesting. It is a version of Earth so it's familiar to the reader and makes immersion easy but it's made more interesting by the addition of Heroes, Villains and Nests. However, for now those three aspects were only lightly touched upon, It would be great to know more about them in the future. - The Updating Stability is on the slower side, but I understand that some authors have busy schedules and daily lives, I only hope the book doesn't get dropped midway. Please author, do not drop your novel.

This story was truly unexpected, but I am so glad I found it. The author gives us such sweet torture with this slow burn and the characters are so well written… even the side characters! And if you are a foodie… the MC definitly makes you want to step into the kitchen, even if it means risking your tastebuds (if you can’t cook like me, LOL). I can’t wait to read more!

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overall a wonderful story. I cant wait for more.