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2024-05-09 06:31

I don't normally read stories of this genre, but was interested by the premise and different perspective on the world of shapeshifters. Although there are scattered grammatical and spelling errors here and there, they aren't jarring like they are in some other novels. They are easily overlooked and don't rudely wake you from the immersion. The MC has a relatively clear and distinct voice and her character is firm, although her 3D-ness does waver at times. The wavering isn't exactly the authors fault (or is it?). It's more to do with this setting and its inherent clichés (or so I believe, since the author has obviously written it in this way for a reason). I haven't been that interested in any of the other stories written by this author and even tried one or two of them before, but I might just give them another chance now.

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