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SeraphWeddLv141yr
2024-01-11 04:06

First Review~! Let me start, *ahem*! First of all, the story was well-paced. There were parts that made me wonder if Kir was a reincarnated person or something, since he seemed to have too much intelligence for a small kid. Still, the narrating and conversations flowed well enough that I had nothing much to say. The grammar was impeccable. Well, as expected of the author, should I say? I haven't found any mistakes that looked like mistakes while reading. Finally, the story itself. It was an interesting plot, with angels and demons in the mix. After reading just a bit, it made me wonder what destiny Kir was burdened with. It's a promising story that I would recommend others to read. That's all! Great work, author, and more chapters~! 😁

The Demon Lord Is An Angel

Haizao
4.9
439 Chs

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HaizaoAuthor

Kir is indeed reincarnated. Though facts and theories are more present in his head, he has lost much of his old memories and personality. Those are for him to discover later on.

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The_True_KING_Lv13

Since I saw the lgbtq tag I have one question mc is straight right?? This is a harem right?? No yuri right??

Haizao:Kir is indeed reincarnated. Though facts and theories are more present in his head, he has lost much of his old memories and personality. Those are for him to discover later on.
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HaizaoAuthor

This is not a harem novel. The characters he's in a relationship with are just as much in a relationship with each other, not solely focused on their relationship to one person. I don't think I ever apply terms like "straight" or "gay" to people in it, and if you insist on such abstracts then I suppose I can say that he's as straight as Alexander The Great of Macedon.

The_True_KING_:Since I saw the lgbtq tag I have one question mc is straight right?? This is a harem right?? No yuri right??
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Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv14

'characters he is in relationship with are just as much in relationship with each other' Why does this statement imply presence of Yuri and harem which you rejected earlier ? 🤔😂

Haizao:This is not a harem novel. The characters he's in a relationship with are just as much in a relationship with each other, not solely focused on their relationship to one person. I don't think I ever apply terms like "straight" or "gay" to people in it, and if you insist on such abstracts then I suppose I can say that he's as straight as Alexander The Great of Macedon.
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Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv14

no but then again it can also imply relationships of his friends now that I think about in more normal sense rather than one distorted by fantasy novels 🤔😂

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Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv14

Also polyamory seems weird here no matter how much I think about it since this isn't a novel with female mc and our mc here is in single romantic relationship so what's up with this alert in summary ?

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HaizaoAuthor

It's not harem. It's polyamory. A harem is singular "owner" focused. A polyamorous relationship is decentralized.

Manmeet_Singh_8886:'characters he is in relationship with are just as much in relationship with each other' Why does this statement imply presence of Yuri and harem which you rejected earlier ? 🤔😂
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Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv14

Does this mean like both male and female leads have multiple lovers? that's surely weird or perhaps unique concept for a novel I would say but now that I think about it I have read a decent story similar to this before but that didn't have 'polyamory' word anywhere 😅 But in that story two main characters loved each other the most as far as feelings were concerned 🤔

Haizao:It's not harem. It's polyamory. A harem is singular "owner" focused. A polyamorous relationship is decentralized.
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HaizaoAuthor

Well, there's just the male lead so far. But yes. that is essentially it. Multiple shared or unshared lovers as part of a constellation of relationships instead of one system rotating around a single body.

Manmeet_Singh_8886:Does this mean like both male and female leads have multiple lovers? that's surely weird or perhaps unique concept for a novel I would say but now that I think about it I have read a decent story similar to this before but that didn't have 'polyamory' word anywhere 😅 But in that story two main characters loved each other the most as far as feelings were concerned 🤔
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SupremeDevilDragonLv3

Hmm... Well, as long as it's just Kir as the 'Only' male that's in this 'polygamous relationship', then It doesn't matter.

Haizao:Well, there's just the male lead so far. But yes. that is essentially it. Multiple shared or unshared lovers as part of a constellation of relationships instead of one system rotating around a single body.
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Not my specific cup of tea but it's a really well written story none the less. Love how it's paced and it doesn't give you time to get bored.

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de_writerLv4

Firstly, that world-building. I was in heaven with it. I guess some people would feel like it's a lot of info-dumps but it's interesting info-dumps nonetheless. As for the plot and characters, both were written so well. I really want to see more romance between Darlae and Brigit (cough *side story* cough). Also the mystery behind Kir's birth mother keeps me hooked.

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Dark_ScholarsLv13

I enjoyed reading this. Kir is an interesting, suspiciously intelligent main character. Just a few chapters in and I am already rooting for him. A small part of me wants to see his dark side but abit a very small part. Loved the characters, the narration was topnotch. Keep it up, Author!

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Blak_cherryLv4

So far, the story has proved to be worth the read. The grammatical structure is at its peak and at the same time, makes it easy for anyone to read. The storyline also progresses in a good way and I would love to say that the book has great potential.

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GoddessKMLv14

This sounds interesting to me, a son of a demon was raised by someone else but turned out and became an angel instead.[img=recommend][img=update]

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droopyauthorLv13

Quite a fun read. Not only Kir, but the side characters also show quite a depth. The one thing i really liked are the interactions. Best read while having a chilled beer. Haha... Good luck

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author writes so well!!! vocabulary structure sentences and grammar Is so perfect! love the plot and the characters are well described you can clearly picture their growth through the novel

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I caught myself reading an Isekai pizza recipe, and I have absolutely no regrets. The focus was not on what I would have expected, but it is a cute, wholesome story. I will definitely come back to it later! I usually write my reviews by pointing out the flaws (in my opinion), but not much to say here (so far). A few typos here and there, or an accidentally repeated word. But they take nothing away from the story! Definitely would recommend!

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BambooFireflyLv4

Hooked since the first chapter! The first line alone was enough to rouse my interest. The main character, Kir, unlike you would expect from a child possesses an uncanny intelligence which leads me to wonder if he is someone who has reincarnated. The grammar is impeccable, as expected! Schedule seems fairly stable and chapter length is just perfect. The plot itself is very intriguing and I can't wait to find out where the author takes this novel!

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