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yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv143mthyokedjaguar

Read the first sentence of the entire ff and you'll understand the 1 star or atleasr until he fixes it. .

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Daily Life with discount system

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KWSeng
KWSengAuthorKWSeng

Can elaborate a bit more. I don't really understand.

sewerslvt
sewerslvtLv3sewerslvt

That person is most likely talking about your grammar. They could've worded it better though. I suggest researching free writing tools that help correct grammar as I'm assuming English isn't your first language.

KWSeng:Can elaborate a bit more. I don't really understand.
FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv14FrightKnight88

What sewer said. Your grammar right now is on par with a sleep deprived 12 year old primary English speaker.

KWSeng:Can elaborate a bit more. I don't really understand.