Translation, updates, character design and world background are good. I mean, its a fanfic, if these four are bad it means that the author shoved in tons of useless OC's or knew nothing about the original works the fanfic is based on. Everything is good but the writing is bad, the story reads like a broken record and the author desperately tries to add foreshadowing into their work... It didn't really hold well. Props to the author, the story was planned out and doesn't involve the classic endless face slapping tropes but events are too disjointed and lack real story telling. Nearl 100 chaps in and all I read were out of sync short stories that came about without reason. There is no direction for the story, an MC who is a side character could work IF the fic has a goal but! Thw goals of the MC are not really clear, he shuffles between 2 worlds and has different goals for each. His motivations are all over the place which ia what allows him to act various roles but with no clear personality the MC just turns into a deus ex machina. If something crazy occured, its because of the MC, how? Next chap will be a full explanation of how it happened. What irks me is the author writes about trying to improve his writing but he follows the same formula continously. Though since this has 4k chapters, I'll stick to it and see, maybe his writing will get better but if it doesn't I'll write a comment about it.
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