Really? lock the chapter in a fanfic??? a fanfic!!!?????

It was really great at first 200-300 chapters, but the communism propaganda began to show up sporadically until it started showing up in your face. I tried to deal with it, but man it was too annoying. If you can deal with communism content, this story is great, well thought out, with organic characters that you can see growth in etc.

It seems I am the first to review. The story and translation is good enough for leisure reading. So many updates in just one hour, author-sab were you stockpiling all the chapters. Anyways I cant check your profile.

This book is actually the best book on here okay maybe the 4th and I’ve read a lot of books on here

Así imagino al protagonista, no se si tienen mejores :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

best time I had reading a fanfic, up there with reading SCOG and suicide hunter. It has it's emotional, humourous, and deep moments, definitely worth the read, every arc is interesting and introduced lots of new things and interactions.

It's good I read 200 chapters. but in this part of the story the protagonist seems like an extra and almost never appears.............................

you know i have read the older translation which was dropped and it was my biggest disappointment that it was dropped but now I got to know that someone is translating it again and have already done more than 1000 chapters I'm very happy ..... THANK YOU[img=update][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

Translation, updates, character design and world background are good. I mean, its a fanfic, if these four are bad it means that the author shoved in tons of useless OC's or knew nothing about the original works the fanfic is based on. Everything is good but the writing is bad, the story reads like a broken record and the author desperately tries to add foreshadowing into their work... It didn't really hold well. Props to the author, the story was planned out and doesn't involve the classic endless face slapping tropes but events are too disjointed and lack real story telling. Nearl 100 chaps in and all I read were out of sync short stories that came about without reason. There is no direction for the story, an MC who is a side character could work IF the fic has a goal but! Thw goals of the MC are not really clear, he shuffles between 2 worlds and has different goals for each. His motivations are all over the place which ia what allows him to act various roles but with no clear personality the MC just turns into a deus ex machina. If something crazy occured, its because of the MC, how? Next chap will be a full explanation of how it happened. What irks me is the author writes about trying to improve his writing but he follows the same formula continously. Though since this has 4k chapters, I'll stick to it and see, maybe his writing will get better but if it doesn't I'll write a comment about it.