the only thing i dont like is how stupid the mc is omg he 20 in mind yet he acts as a dom child without any intellect . you also give him templates to fast in my opnion it doest give the story any progression at this point he wil have every op power in jjk long before minato even becomes hokage ps i like that you take give pols on themplate end all but i can tell from diffriends story good writer regret doing this and give up on there stories becouse its not there vision anymore and become bore of it
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The part about polls is very true. Once an author gives away their power to decide the direction of their story then they are bound to not be motivated anymore if it’s their hobby.
The options I put in the surveys are templates that I want to write but cannot choose between.
Nyxio:The part about polls is very true. Once an author gives away their power to decide the direction of their story then they are bound to not be motivated anymore if it’s their hobby.
bro that just like me
OLD_storage:The options I put in the surveys are templates that I want to write but cannot choose between.
In fact, even if I gave him the powers of the entire jujutsukaisen universe, it would be impossible for him to be extremely strong before the actual battle.
Mahoraga?
OLD_storage:In fact, even if I gave him the powers of the entire jujutsukaisen universe, it would be impossible for him to be extremely strong before the actual battle.
u know maharaga isn't all powerful , if u can produce a strong enough attack maharaga can be defeated
Fallen_saint:Mahoraga?
u know maharaga isn't all powerful , if u can produce a strong enough attack maharaga can be defeated
Fallen_saint:Mahoraga?
i mean never saw the idiot mc as a valid review if the mc suffers from his mistake and repeats that same mistake sure it would be valid to not like the mc , but if the mc is just an idiot it isnt valid , i can say with 100% certainty that u at least made some stupid decisions in your life , mc who aren't smart supposed to a layer of relatability ,that no human is perfect . Hating the mc just bc he isn't smart as u want is u running away from the part that makes u human
Sigh that why we read novels and fanfics if I want to see humans faults and mistakes I can just see in my neighborhood. And dude even if mc is stupid he is supposed to atleast bit interesting not like this I have seen many works with stupid MCs and they were interesting and fun to watch
Daoist4MxvaV:i mean never saw the idiot mc as a valid review if the mc suffers from his mistake and repeats that same mistake sure it would be valid to not like the mc , but if the mc is just an idiot it isnt valid , i can say with 100% certainty that u at least made some stupid decisions in your life , mc who aren't smart supposed to a layer of relatability ,that no human is perfect . Hating the mc just bc he isn't smart as u want is u running away from the part that makes u human
