hi guys Please share any translation errors you encounter with a paragraph comment.Unfortunately, my English is not enough to write a book. For this reason, I get help from translate and AI while translating the original text into English. (don't get me wrong, this is my original work)

painful to read, plenty of annoying mistakes but that is not my main problem. for some reason mc is schizophrenic with a lot of hallucinations that don't make him appealing to me. really hard to read about character that I can't like. if you wish you read that novel be warned , there is very little logic in the mind of the mc.

the only thing i dont like is how stupid the mc is omg he 20 in mind yet he acts as a dom child without any intellect . you also give him templates to fast in my opnion it doest give the story any progression at this point he wil have every op power in jjk long before minato even becomes hokage ps i like that you take give pols on themplate end all but i can tell from diffriends story good writer regret doing this and give up on there stories becouse its not there vision anymore and become bore of it

Why does most of the jjk fanfics have mc who has mental problems or straight out edgy psychopath .......,........,.............................,............................................

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One of the better story’s on this app

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it's kinda a little dark and also a little little little little CRINGE 😬

pretty good tho mc is way too op for my likeing