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jaro_onody

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  • jaro_onody3 days ago
    Posted

    a boring story , .......................................................................................................................................

  • jaro_onody7 days ago
    Posted

    a vanilla story , to be honest it lacks excitement, it uses the the dark premies off Parents abandoning naruto but has zero effect because of the people that take there place .

  • jaro_onody24 days ago
    Posted

    i never understuud why autors choose to make mc lose there memories , i mean what the point of reincarnation when you make him forget the entire plot . you could have just put the mc in the story wit power that he was born with and it wouldt make any defrens

  • jaro_onody25 days ago
    Commented

    wtf no fight this was disapointing

    This book has been deleted.
  • jaro_onody3 months ago
    Posted

    It's an interesting concept, but I find it a bit boring. The main character (MC) is too indecisive. Despite being the strongest being on Earth right now, he literally fears everything. Another issue is that he doesn’t really act like someone who's been isekai'd. His mindset feels too narrow for the situation. As I said, he's the strongest on Earth at the moment—he could easily take the Dragon Radar from Bulma, collect all the Dragon Balls, and then beat the crap out of Goku and Piccolo. He could even tell them that stronger fighters will arrive in a year. After that, he could use the Dragon Balls to teleport to Namek and make three wishes there. Also, the wishes you mentioned are a bit underwhelming. Since he's an isekai character, why not wish for something that any real fan would want? For example, a gaming system, gravity magic, a skill for stealing talents, or even something like infinite evolution. Or maybe something practical, like the ability to breathe in space or access to other types of magic. It's something I've never really understood in these kinds of stories.

  • jaro_onody3 months ago
    Posted

    mc character is all over the place.....................................................................................................................

  • jaro_onody3 months ago
    Posted

    good story but the pacing of it is so slow ,almost 40 chapters in and he stil didnt realy do shit....................................................

  • jaro_onody4 months ago
    Posted

    finaly sommone who truely can translate a damm storie , brother bless you and take my damm stones....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................