jaro_onody

finaly a good system story keep it upp ...............................................................................................................................

confusing story , started very wel then after chap 2 its just goes down. translation is med................................................................

very interesting concept . the only thing i dont like is the mc personalty , you didt need to make him a cry baby and so awkward ...............................................

the story itself feels like its been made by ai or translited by one . probably both . calling the same moves by different name like sonido or flash step that someting tipical for ai . skill that are masterd are sometims shown as ultimate ten 5ch later that same skill is proficient. story itself is kind off mid , doesn't have any high points . just a op mc that follows the plot . anyway the auhtor doesn't read his translation or edited them

how he mastered all kiddo under 80 like was mentiont in past chapters it was letterly system reward

this doest make sens

feels like ai no personalty at al translation is 4 star very good, but the story is beyond mid........................................................

i see what you did here indeed

wait ist great darkness just a title given to lucifer

what i really deslike in chinees fics is that they are trying to reinvent things like how chakra works or how genjutsu works. l like come on we all watched the same show you dont need to change the mechanics or its laws