jaro_onody

im surprised, this story is fire..................................................................................................................................

the more i read the more i thinks that its the author himself who is 6 years old child .not given it a bad review but im skipping this story .i have seen 5years old naruto mc who where more mature then this. a bit of a disappointment ,it started good

the story is really undefined , like who is the mc is it madara or isakai mc -this one bothers me the most he reconniced that it harry potter universe but doest realy have any knowledge about it , author ignores this entry

intresting story , but the there are a lot of thing that dont realy make sense in the story by it bye adding jutsus that he never learend or mentiont before or him surviving a jutsu from a jonin , has low chunning level of chackra but he (kind off) spams justus like its noting i understand that this is not gamer fic but you could at least mention the progress off his power... also you describtion off orochimaru is wricked --- i love it

a boring story , .......................................................................................................................................

he is so overpowerd now

a vanilla story , to be honest it lacks excitement, it uses the the dark premies off Parents abandoning naruto but has zero effect because of the people that take there place .

i never understuud why autors choose to make mc lose there memories , i mean what the point of reincarnation when you make him forget the entire plot . you could have just put the mc in the story wit power that he was born with and it wouldt make any defrens

wtf no fight this was disapointing

It's an interesting concept, but I find it a bit boring. The main character (MC) is too indecisive. Despite being the strongest being on Earth right now, he literally fears everything. Another issue is that he doesn’t really act like someone who's been isekai'd. His mindset feels too narrow for the situation. As I said, he's the strongest on Earth at the moment—he could easily take the Dragon Radar from Bulma, collect all the Dragon Balls, and then beat the crap out of Goku and Piccolo. He could even tell them that stronger fighters will arrive in a year. After that, he could use the Dragon Balls to teleport to Namek and make three wishes there. Also, the wishes you mentioned are a bit underwhelming. Since he's an isekai character, why not wish for something that any real fan would want? For example, a gaming system, gravity magic, a skill for stealing talents, or even something like infinite evolution. Or maybe something practical, like the ability to breathe in space or access to other types of magic. It's something I've never really understood in these kinds of stories.