Yeah no.. I thought this would be a dark story but yikes, chessy lines, amateurish writing. I felt like i was reading a diary of a 15 year old with some fantasy elements. Main character is beyond edgy and dialogues are out of the place.
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LIKEI would probably feel much more comfortable, being honest with authors who have terrible writing skills, i think honesty is the most important thing especially if you are an author, because without it you can't improve. It's like the mother who says to her ugly kids that they are beautiful and handsome, etc. .
AkumaCanBeKind:internet has really made it easy for people to talk crap and not get punched in the face for it.
there's a difference between 'being rude' and 'giving others advice' and your's was clearly the first one.
zes13:I would probably feel much more comfortable, being honest with authors who have terrible writing skills, i think honesty is the most important thing especially if you are an author, because without it you can't improve. It's like the mother who says to her ugly kids that they are beautiful and handsome, etc. .