Yeah no.. I thought this would be a dark story but yikes, chessy lines, amateurish writing. I felt like i was reading a diary of a 15 year old with some fantasy elements. Main character is beyond edgy and dialogues are out of the place.
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LIKEI would probably feel much more comfortable, being honest with authors who have terrible writing skills, i think honesty is the most important thing especially if you are an author, because without it you can't improve. It's like the mother who says to her ugly kids that they are beautiful and handsome, etc. .
lmfao. yeah, although I "kind of" like this novel, but just because someone doesn't like the same stuff as you don't mean they have bad taste.
People's tastes may differ across different genres, but when it comes to writing quality, it's a skill issue if you can't see it, not taste. I'm not even shaming the story itself, even if it's a cliche that's been written thousands of times by other mediocre writers. My critique is purely focused on the quality of the writing.
Very true. (I was agreeing with you btw)
cant fault you for the first comment, that was criticism, but now you're just being a dick. you're not here for life changing fiction, you're on webnovel, it is not known for having the peak of literature. don't act as if your taste is some grand objective thing when you are on a website literally known for its copy and paste novels. don't be so arrogant when you're on here, your opinion matters just as much as everyone elses.
well, it wasnt me who insulted a random person on internet whom i know nothing about lol what a prick