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Apolonchene06
Apolonchene06Lv51yr
2024-02-29 01:04

Honestly only 16 chapters and I'm already hooked. The novel is a bit strange and hard to understand at the start but when you start to understand what's happening you also understand how great the potential of the novel is.The author focuses on an entirely different path compared to his other novel, we start with an mc already at the top but weak, he reincarnates in an unknown body without any memory, so he doesn't know how to cast any spell and use mana but he's freaking good at emotion magic whose power depends on the understanding of the emotions.It's way better than any other magical novel cause here we don't have a bunch of elemental or conceptual spells that are just dumbed down and spammed but we really understand the intricacy of the spell by feeling the emotions alongside the mc.The author is doing an incredible job at conveying feelings especially by playing with our empathy like a boss.Making me even doubt who the saddest between the mc and me when he cast a sadness spell 🤣.Anyway the mc is thrown in disarray at the very start, without any anchor and knowledge about the world and he's in a difficult situation cause he's placed at the first rank of the academy. Very different to Ren who tried to look as lackluster as possible while being strong when here the mc needs to own up to his rank with his meager strength ...very interesting concept and story, great writing as always , and the world background seems intrigiuing.

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Entrail_JI
Entrail_JIAuthor

Thank you so much for the long and detailed review!

Apolonchene06
Apolonchene06Lv5

nah thank you for coming back with another banger and still trusting the community even tho your last novel was the most pirated novel on any platform (sad way to display how great your novel was and how large of an audience you had, considering panda novel developed mostly thanks to your novel). Anyway you have my full trust for this novel and I'm eager to see how the story will unfold. Thanks again for being a source of inspiration for many authors (you literally are for me the one who made the extra/reader trope so popular), and bringing new concepts to light on the platform by exploring new paths to already existing tropes. You're literally a well of renewal .

Entrail_JI:Thank you so much for the long and detailed review!
NoNamedpotato
NoNamedpotatoLv3

author have you created discord server yet?

Entrail_JI:Thank you so much for the long and detailed review!
Entrail_JI
Entrail_JIAuthor

Yes, I have. I can’t send the link, but you should be able to find it in synopsis of author pov. I’ll add it in this novel too

NoNamedpotato:author have you created discord server yet?
Fruce
FruceLv4

Paragraphs are units of writing in a text that consist of one or more sentences grouped together. They serve to organize content and help readers understand the structure and flow of the text. Here are some key characteristics and functions of paragraphs: 1. **Topic Sentence**: Often, a paragraph begins with a topic sentence that states the main idea or point of the paragraph. 2. **Supporting Sentences**: Following the topic sentence, there are supporting sentences that provide details, examples, and explanations to elaborate on the main idea. 3. **Coherence and Unity**: A well-written paragraph maintains coherence and unity, meaning all sentences are related to the main idea and logically flow from one to the next. 4. **Transition**: Paragraphs can include transitional words or phrases to connect ideas between paragraphs, ensuring smooth reading. 5. **Visual Breaks**: In written text, paragraphs provide visual breaks, making the text more readable and less intimidating. In essence, paragraphs are fundamental building blocks in writing, aiding in the clear and effective communication of ideas.

Apolonchene06
Apolonchene06Lv5

bruh... using paragraphs don't work on phone, I tried but each time it just deletes them and it looks like that....

Fruce:Paragraphs are units of writing in a text that consist of one or more sentences grouped together. They serve to organize content and help readers understand the structure and flow of the text. Here are some key characteristics and functions of paragraphs: 1. **Topic Sentence**: Often, a paragraph begins with a topic sentence that states the main idea or point of the paragraph. 2. **Supporting Sentences**: Following the topic sentence, there are supporting sentences that provide details, examples, and explanations to elaborate on the main idea. 3. **Coherence and Unity**: A well-written paragraph maintains coherence and unity, meaning all sentences are related to the main idea and logically flow from one to the next. 4. **Transition**: Paragraphs can include transitional words or phrases to connect ideas between paragraphs, ensuring smooth reading. 5. **Visual Breaks**: In written text, paragraphs provide visual breaks, making the text more readable and less intimidating. In essence, paragraphs are fundamental building blocks in writing, aiding in the clear and effective communication of ideas.
Apolonchene06
Apolonchene06Lv5

and thanks chat gpt btw would be better if you could produce a text by yourself

Fruce:Paragraphs are units of writing in a text that consist of one or more sentences grouped together. They serve to organize content and help readers understand the structure and flow of the text. Here are some key characteristics and functions of paragraphs: 1. **Topic Sentence**: Often, a paragraph begins with a topic sentence that states the main idea or point of the paragraph. 2. **Supporting Sentences**: Following the topic sentence, there are supporting sentences that provide details, examples, and explanations to elaborate on the main idea. 3. **Coherence and Unity**: A well-written paragraph maintains coherence and unity, meaning all sentences are related to the main idea and logically flow from one to the next. 4. **Transition**: Paragraphs can include transitional words or phrases to connect ideas between paragraphs, ensuring smooth reading. 5. **Visual Breaks**: In written text, paragraphs provide visual breaks, making the text more readable and less intimidating. In essence, paragraphs are fundamental building blocks in writing, aiding in the clear and effective communication of ideas.
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Deadly_Healer
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There are not a lot of stories these days that can hook you since start. Good stories have become rare these days. But here I am hooked since prologue. I love the theme of novel which is mainly focused on emotions so I know for sure that it's gonna be a thrilling and blood pumping roller coaster of emotions. MC feels a like person and most importantly human, a real living HUMAN like all of us. He isn't someone who was like. "Oh I died but nah I got transmigrated so like all other Mcs my job should be avoid bad ending and og protagonist and go my way by avoiding death at costs as well as making a lot of strong connection all the way." He behaves how anyone of us could have behaved.He goes through all phases of regret, denial, reluctance, partial acceptance. He doesn't wanna live there he wanna go home where his little brother is. He loves him more than anything even more than himself. So another merit is, he isn't a cold blooded murderer but a sane and principled person. I also love the duality of his character He is mentally broken and sane at the same time. He has suffered by a lot of negative emotions in his past life and is mentally vulnerable but at the same time that's his strongest trait. He is mentally strong because he has already been exposed to all kinds of negativities to extreme. Every chapter is like he is walking on a thin line between sanity and insanity no one knows when and where will he trip. Whether he will loose himself in dark abyss or will be king of its king is still a mystery? So if you wanna know 😜 do give this a try.

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