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zes13

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  • zes13
    zes136d
    Posted

    It surprises me that this novel has this many fanboys, this is like one of the most overrated webnovel i have seen over the years. There is no emotional depth in it, like you can kill any major character and it wouldn't feel a thing, you can't connect with the characters, even with the main character. Grammar and prose are pretty painful in both elements. Maybe the most repetitive use of adjectives I've ever read, and I'm not exaggerating. You would think "tenebrous" and "taciturn" were actual surnames judging by how often they are used before certain characters. The dialogues feels cheesy and boring sometimes. I mean i really tried enjoying it, who wouldn't want to read a good webnovel while also having a good time..

    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • zes13
    zes1317d
    Posted

    Yeah no.. I thought this would be a dark story but yikes, chessy lines, amateurish writing. I felt like i was reading a diary of a 15 year old with some fantasy elements. Main character is beyond edgy and dialogues are out of the place.

    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • zes13
    zes1324d
    Posted

    after chapter 180+ or so translation quality drops very badly, i would not recommend reading this here at all. I wonder what kind of machine the translator used to translate this thing, its no different from mtl..

    Renegade Immortal
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • zes13
    zes131mth
    Commented

    yeah, as i follower of this novel from the beginning im done, thanks.

    Ch 453 TRAP
    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes131mth
    Commented

    we are not the buddha author, please stop testing our patience.

    Ch 452 Trap
    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes131mth
    Commented

    sigh

    Ch 447 Judgement
    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes132mth
    Posted

    one word and that is BORING. I am sorry but this is no different than generic reincarnation novels, its subpar and author probably used ai in the first chapters and thats turn off more.

    Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
    Fantasy · RealmWeaver
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  • zes13
    zes132mth
    Posted

    It was a okay read till chapter 300+ or so but author has no loyalty to the story and i think that is the biggest red flag, until he fixes it, it doesnt deserve a score above 2.

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes132mth
    Replied to Tudaren

    I was thinking the title doesn't make sense because Asher doesn't feel like a villain :D

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes132mth
    Replied to Mura3

    tbh i dont even expect anything from this novel, its just a huge let down.

    Ch 419 Trap of Memories V - Crumble
    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes133mth
    Posted

    dropped after learning mc becames a slave to some chick, what worse is he doesnt get revenge and even fell in love with the woman who made him slave, unbelievable lol

    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • zes13
    zes133mth
    Posted

    Firstly the biggest reason i dropped this, after the first volume author started to yap too much. I have no idea how to imagine the fights, scenery etc. with that confusing, random narrative. Well, thanks anyway.

    I'll Surpass The MC
    Eastern · Anvelope
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  • zes13
    zes134mth
    Posted

    Dear author, my suggestion would be to write the chapters in advance before start posting again. That way, in case of emergencies or other unforeseen circumstances, your audience won't be left hanging and you won't risk losing your audience.

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes134mth
    Replied to Raos_IOI

    😭😭😭

    Ch 397 Unknown
    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes135mth
    Replied to Ansholix

    the readers probably wouldnt mind it if he went hiatus, after all everyone has a life outside of work but going hiatus without any note is really disappointing.

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes136mth
    Posted

    is this really dropped? if so, huge disappointment.. i was thinking the story progressing smoothly and we will soon get to the excited part..

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes136mth
    Replied to CHAOS_FOOLISH

    there is no romance i hope the story doesnt focus romance.

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes137mth
    Posted

    i am not sure main character is really the main character anymore. his screen time is so little and chapters are too short so i can't tell. the pacing is slow asf.

    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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  • zes13
    zes138mth
    Posted

    Mr. Author dont get me wrong i like reading your story and your writing seems to get good with every chapter but you really need to stop breaking the fourth wall man, it's just annoying.

    I Will Kill The Author
    Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
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  • zes13
    zes139mth
    Posted

    We really need a physical copy for this.

    Lord of Mysteries
    Fantasy · 爱潜水的乌贼
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