Hello, author here. Feel free to ask any questions you may have about the story! I hope you will enjoy the scenario as it becomes better the further we progress.

I just finished bingeing all 189 chapters and thought I’d write a review. I’ve throughly enjoyed reading this novel so far. The writing quality is decent. The world building is alright so far even tho we haven’t gotten to see much of the world just yet. The pacing isnt too fast nor is it too slow. There has been only been 1 fight that I found sorta draggy so that’s a plus. Character development is on point for our 2 main characters. This novel can be a bit dark at times but if you can handle that I’d recommend you give this a try.

I just finished the story until now(376) and i must say, while its not the best writing I‘ve ever seen its still way better than a lot of things I‘ve seen before. The story though is really and i mean REALLY entertaing, while not having any mindblowing plottwists, its a really coherent and well done story, I especially like the fighting scenes, as they’re really fun to read and make sense, with that im implying there’s realism in this novel, something rarely seen.sometimes though there are certain parts, while not often, exist that I had to read twice to really understand whats happening but they‘re rarely seen and dont disrupt the flow of the story at all. The characters are well written and while not perfectly done act understandably and they gave actual personalities, Including the villains, they all have an actual goal and are not mere plot convenience in the story to make the mc stronger, they‘re actual living beings. The world building is very good though, with the rankings, backround of the world, new realms etc. etc. it forms a nice world for the mc and his group to explore. What I also like though are the neat little details like the battle monster club, something that makes sense since children want to have fun, them actually having to capture the monsters form a drive for those kids to explore and makes each deck unique in its own way and with the magical technology they have it‘s something that makes actual sense to appear in this world. The story progresses quite nicely and doesn‘t linger on one aspect like a simple training schedule for like 10 chapters, l dont really know abaout ipdate stabilty since i binge read the whole thing in like 2 days im just gonna give it 4 stars. All In all its a really enjoyable story which kept me reading for hours on end and dismissing all my studies, procrastination at its finest. I also spent 40 thousand points on popularity for the presumable fl of the story, if we‘re already there, when will she come back??

I'll give 5 stars before the read and five stars after I finish my reads bcos I'm chill like that huhu This book is in my collection so everyone who sees this review must finish the book. Or I'll place a curse on whoever reads this.

it has potential and concept of the mc is nice. having two MCs is also refreshing unfortunately the end of the first volume is a bit of forced plot and was executed poorly

I don't know why but lost interest after some chapters, given the name of the story it's synopsis and reviews, I thought it would be a interesting read 😔, may be it's just me. The writing is good, the start was captivating, but once the MC was introduced it was downhill for me, I don't know about others, MC unable to be in his body, alone made me not read further. Sorry, it's not my cup of tea.

Is this novel competing in WSA 2024? Please reply.

Although the author implied that English is not their first language, so far, it's been great. The gramma is pretty good. There are still little chapters, but it has quite progressed. Keep it up!

Author has improved dramatically over time. super underrated honestly. try it!

Reaally good and decent novel. The main positive of this novel is that the plot and characters are interesting and it keeps you engaged. And I would say we haven’t even begun with the most interesting stuff, that would happen once MC turns 13.