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Glad you're enjoying the read. <3
Clarified it a bit. The scene before was in front of the gates, not inside.
The pacing trades a bit of momentum to flesh out the MC, which made it a fun read for me, and even funnier when he's killed and reincarnated into his killer's novel. The writing is consistent, with a couple of tense slips easily ignored for the unique premise. Wish you luck with your story, man.
I forgot about him hahahaha
Wow... The first chapters actually made me tense and root for melody. Very nice opening. Like how you don't shy from touching dark subjects, and how melody made her choice. Next chapters actually got me sad... Her father's horrible. Keep up the good work.
I hope you'll enjoy the ride.
Worldbuilding's there, characters' backstories as well, and the world is politically and geographically fleshed out. The power system looks amazing, too, and the precise wording gives me a huge (in a good way) indian vibe. The story has potential, and the author seems to know where he wants to take us. All it needs is small edits for the story to blossom!
If you're into powerful xianxia beastmen, this story has everything to please you. The protagonist is powerful, but most of all, regretful. He recognises his mistake after his world fell apart, and tries to fix it with those he once loved. The writing focuses on emotions, which makes it easy to track how everyone feels. The world-building is progressively revealed as we read through, so no heavy infodumps, and that's amazing. Good luck with your writing, author.
sure. It seems like you missed all the explanations. Hop on discord if you really want to understand or continue to accuse me wrongly.
I hope you'll recover soon, and thank you for your support. I just hope you'll read my new baby (preferably on Royal Road. I'm sure you'll enjoy it.