

Progression fantasy author who enjoys epic fights and stubbornly refuses to drop books. Check out my book if you're the same. Discord: https://discord.gg/ubzzKM5wfp Patreon: patreon.com/Adamus_Auguste
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I forgot about him hahahaha
Wow... The first chapters actually made me tense and root for melody. Very nice opening. Like how you don't shy from touching dark subjects, and how melody made her choice. Next chapters actually got me sad... Her father's horrible. Keep up the good work.
I hope you'll enjoy the ride.
Worldbuilding's there, characters' backstories as well, and the world is politically and geographically fleshed out. The power system looks amazing, too, and the precise wording gives me a huge (in a good way) indian vibe. The story has potential, and the author seems to know where he wants to take us. All it needs is small edits for the story to blossom!
If you're into powerful xianxia beastmen, this story has everything to please you. The protagonist is powerful, but most of all, regretful. He recognises his mistake after his world fell apart, and tries to fix it with those he once loved. The writing focuses on emotions, which makes it easy to track how everyone feels. The world-building is progressively revealed as we read through, so no heavy infodumps, and that's amazing. Good luck with your writing, author.
sure. It seems like you missed all the explanations. Hop on discord if you really want to understand or continue to accuse me wrongly.
I hope you'll recover soon, and thank you for your support. I just hope you'll read my new baby (preferably on Royal Road. I'm sure you'll enjoy it.
Hey, I just wanted to ask if you didn't enjoy my new novel.
Good ideas and description. high potential if you keep it up. Don't give up, man. You got me curious about how he'd get things right after reincarnation.
Hahaha hahaha. WTF