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Avallanti
AvallantiLv18mth
2024-09-07 03:18

So far, reading on from whenever the free chaps lock it seems fire. Ima give it the benefit of the doubt, nothing for me to criticize rlly. Hopefully webnovel brings back the fast pass feature or something so I can continue.

The Bodyguard System

Alan_Wafula
3.5
432 Chs

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Mr_Thief
Mr_ThiefLv4

Everything was going fine untill a dumb billionaire hired a bodyguard for his only daughter from a bankrupt company instead of other companies and without even experience. Lol, dropped

1yr

Aaditya_Prince
Aaditya_PrinceLv3

author nice novel and i want to know about when you are posting the hundred time income multiplier next part 2 and about what happen to jack after getting sucked by the blackhole

1yr
BIGINZOXx9
BIGINZOXx9Lv4

10 comment but million view we can all Know that the author have delete comment I was expecting a novel where mc we have a bodyguard system and do a lot of job with different people and build connection why getting reward from the system not expecting a novel where mc have to protect one annoying girl who we all know FL.

7mth
DrunkenGoose23
DrunkenGoose23Lv14

Ive read 378 chapters. not worth it. what's the point of introducing Scarlett when you aren't even gonna have her and idiot bodyguard get together at this point. better have her show back up in 20 chapters to show her living a sad life without the guy she is in love with because of... wait let me check... "reasons". did you write the story while thinking of a girl in your personal life then she rejected you and now the character of Scarlett just has to be a sad existence. honestly who cares about this world you've built for your story, it's boring and the girl deserves to be happy but at this point why even bother ever reading further.

5mth
Shadow_XL
Shadow_XLLv4

I like it but I do wish there were more good characters. Scarlet sucks so far and is really annoying, I really hope that when eventually she warms up to the MC she actually apologizes for her behavior and I hope the MC doesn't forgive her without a sincere apology cuz that's just simp behavior.

1yr
Bilal_Waleed
Bilal_WaleedLv12

But even then. These 3 words are quite repetitive.

1yr
Alajun
AlajunLv11

I love this book author. I see the invincibility tag here, just what I like. An update please 🥺.

1yr
nbabraves
nbabravesLv13

Was excited about it. Gets a bit annoying MC refuses to do anything unless a mission comes and basically extorts his client while she’s in danger. I am not a huge fan of MC’s who only do things when their system asks them to.

4mth
Reaper2op
Reaper2opLv4

Dropped on 3rd chapter, too much yapping and repetition. Also the system said no punishment for not doing missions yet the 1st mission he gets has a HUGE punishment smh

5mth
ZxeroX
ZxeroXLv13

I love plot and it’s a great story. You gave the characters some depth . However , you need to work on your grammar and have a better wording for describing or even continuing a sentence. You use those 3 0r 4 words over and over again, it’s annoying really . I almost stop because of that . Sadly I won’t be buying any chapters because of those reasons . Keep up the good work and improve . Next you release a book. I will definitely check it out. I hope you improve a lot by then

7mth
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