Item: The Bodyguard System
Rating: 3.8
Author: ZxeroX

ZxeroXLv136mth

2024-09-23 08:57

I love plot and it’s a great story. You gave the characters some depth . However , you need to work on your grammar and have a better wording for describing or even continuing a sentence. You use those 3 0r 4 words over and over again, it’s annoying really . I almost stop because of that . Sadly I won’t be buying any chapters because of those reasons . Keep up the good work and improve . Next you release a book. I will definitely check it out. I hope you improve a lot by then

The Bodyguard System

Alan_Wafula

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10 comment but million view we can all Know that the author have delete comment I was expecting a novel where mc we have a bodyguard system and do a lot of job with different people and build connection why getting reward from the system not expecting a novel where mc have to protect one annoying girl who we all know FL.

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Ive read 378 chapters. not worth it. what's the point of introducing Scarlett when you aren't even gonna have her and idiot bodyguard get together at this point. better have her show back up in 20 chapters to show her living a sad life without the guy she is in love with because of... wait let me check... "reasons". did you write the story while thinking of a girl in your personal life then she rejected you and now the character of Scarlett just has to be a sad existence. honestly who cares about this world you've built for your story, it's boring and the girl deserves to be happy but at this point why even bother ever reading further.

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But even then. These 3 words are quite repetitive.

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I love this book author. I see the invincibility tag here, just what I like. An update please 🥺.

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