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2024-12-04 04:44

Ive read 378 chapters. not worth it. what's the point of introducing Scarlett when you aren't even gonna have her and idiot bodyguard get together at this point. better have her show back up in 20 chapters to show her living a sad life without the guy she is in love with because of... wait let me check... "reasons". did you write the story while thinking of a girl in your personal life then she rejected you and now the character of Scarlett just has to be a sad existence. honestly who cares about this world you've built for your story, it's boring and the girl deserves to be happy but at this point why even bother ever reading further.

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okay I've not read anymore since this last comment but it suddenly said completed and I had to read the first couple sentences that the last chapter lets me read without paying money. "intergalactic space ship???" what the hell happened in the 40chapters i didn't read? he was bodyguarding some stupid soldier last I saw and in 40 chaps it's outer space? thank God if this train has come to a stop guys honestly it's like watching a train derailment except without all the fun parts. the only victims here are me, my wallet and the hours I can never get back.

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