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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv152mth
2024-10-24 12:55

It Isnt to bad a read however the glaring spelling and grammar mistakes does not make this an enjoyable read at all. I like a smooth flowing story yet this one showed no author pride as the errors just piled up. Considering the length of the time this has been out and there is no obvious attempt to fix these mistakes leaves me disappointed. The idea of the various pantheons of Gods exisiting and how they are intermixed is a rather novel approach and one that could have been delivered well if a bit of the sin of pride was used here instead of the sin of sloth and greed coming out. My advice is to get a proofreader before you release chapters and show some positive commitment to the novel.

I'm The Devil

Adams2004
4.3
299 Chs

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Artoriastheabyssen
ArtoriastheabyssenLv15

Seems like an interesting read so far, but there are some minor issues with run on sentences and misspelled words. Author might need to do some minor editing on some chapters but overall is still easily readable. The story of the mythology itself seems more like the DC version of creation where the prescense created the universe then basically dumped the universe onto the primordial gods. I’m interested to read more so keep up the good work.

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Adams2004
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Author here Giving my work a five star since it is my work you can ask anything your questions here and I will answer them to the best of my ability. Thank you for reading my Novel You can support me by spending your by Commenting your thoughts about the Novel so that I can improve and make it to your liking. Power Stones giving me Golden Tickets and let's not forget, Gifts Thanks once again for reading my Book

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Daoist7bUC0E
Daoist7bUC0ELv3

Bro this would be so good if you kept this free i looked for similiar fan fic and when i finally found yours i was so happy 😭

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Suny869
Suny869Lv13

well story is ok and i like olympus mythology you all know specially about Zeus well i don't know how to describe him we all know atleast Little bit about him which is I'm sure not good things. only problem i have with this novel is that is involvement of hindu god and i know it's Just a story so i shouldn't take seriously but it's hard when your favourite GOD is getting bitten or insulted. ok i accept I'm believer of lord SHIVA.

9mth
Paul_Jones
Paul_JonesLv15

The idea for the story is wonderful. I love the mythology and the way the crazy s***All that happened, but it is just wrote so strange.And the powers are so unclear that I don't particularly enjoy it. People talk and act weird with no real explanation on why. It's just not for me.

9mth
micheal_osborn
micheal_osbornLv4

I have really enjoyed this one and hope it continues for a long time, so please keep it up.

9mth
Faith_Albert_7019
Faith_Albert_7019Lv1

your stories has been nice so far, keep up the good work, check your spellings and make corrections. one love💓

10mth
Muze_Rion
Muze_RionLv13

Very detailed and easy to understand novel, it really dives into the realm of gods and mythology.

10mth
Nyarla
NyarlaLv4

It's sad that webnovels have become mandatory reading via an app. The app is not available in my country, and I also read using Google Translate. I had to stop reading many of these works.

1mth
TianHa
TianHaLv4

Trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash

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