Item: I'm The Devil
Rating: 3
Author: Suny869

Suny869Lv1310mth

2024-03-02 10:03

well story is ok and i like olympus mythology you all know specially about Zeus well i don't know how to describe him we all know atleast Little bit about him which is I'm sure not good things. only problem i have with this novel is that is involvement of hindu god and i know it's Just a story so i shouldn't take seriously but it's hard when your favourite GOD is getting bitten or insulted. ok i accept I'm believer of lord SHIVA.

I'm The Devil

Adams2004

4.3

300 Chs

Liked by 13 people

Replies10

Deadrule_vivekLv5

Lord shiva is very powerful and on the realm of primordials.. Idk why people use him in their stories, why not use indra who is as powerful as zeus? These people don't even know the mythology yet try to use it in the stories

10mth

Suny869Lv13

i totally agree with you because LORD SHIVA is existed long before everything like author described a GOD who created a angels and everything that's kinda supreme being LORD SHIVA is atleast in HINDU mythology.

Deadrule_vivek:Lord shiva is very powerful and on the realm of primordials.. Idk why people use him in their stories, why not use indra who is as powerful as zeus? These people don't even know the mythology yet try to use it in the stories

10mth

Deadrule_vivekLv5

Yup lord shiva have the power of death and concept of absolute destruction... He's more powerful out Tridev At least dxd has shown a bit of respect to shiva but others don't get this

Suny869:i totally agree with you because LORD SHIVA is existed long before everything like author described a GOD who created a angels and everything that's kinda supreme being LORD SHIVA is atleast in HINDU mythology.

10mth

Vishal_Jagnayak_3739Lv13

your right lord Shiva can easily destroy and create universe not to mention there is also much more

10mth

LtbutterflyLv13

Why have religious rants about these things when your all just a bunch of Indians with no understanding about other faiths and mythologies beyond your own?

Deadrule_vivek:Yup lord shiva have the power of death and concept of absolute destruction... He's more powerful out Tridev At least dxd has shown a bit of respect to shiva but others don't get this

9mth

_Nyx_Wk_Lv13

exactly what I thought.....

Ltbutterfly:Why have religious rants about these things when your all just a bunch of Indians with no understanding about other faiths and mythologies beyond your own?

9mth

Suny869Lv13

yup you are right but the same words apply to you.

Ltbutterfly:Why have religious rants about these things when your all just a bunch of Indians with no understanding about other faiths and mythologies beyond your own?

9mth

Supreme_TitanLv3

Check out my book, its quute similar or eveben better. Currently it is free, its name is The Beast That Swallows Tge World. Its based on various mythology. I hole u like it

5mth

Supreme_TitanLv3

Mind my spellings 🥲

5mth

Rayzer_6209Lv1

Sorry but Yahweh would put them all to the ground.

4mth

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Seems like an interesting read so far, but there are some minor issues with run on sentences and misspelled words. Author might need to do some minor editing on some chapters but overall is still easily readable. The story of the mythology itself seems more like the DC version of creation where the prescense created the universe then basically dumped the universe onto the primordial gods. I’m interested to read more so keep up the good work.

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Author here Giving my work a five star since it is my work you can ask anything your questions here and I will answer them to the best of my ability. Thank you for reading my Novel You can support me by spending your by Commenting your thoughts about the Novel so that I can improve and make it to your liking. Power Stones giving me Golden Tickets and let's not forget, Gifts Thanks once again for reading my Book

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The idea for the story is wonderful. I love the mythology and the way the crazy s***All that happened, but it is just wrote so strange.And the powers are so unclear that I don't particularly enjoy it. People talk and act weird with no real explanation on why. It's just not for me.

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your stories has been nice so far, keep up the good work, check your spellings and make corrections. one love💓

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