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WorldofimaginationLv127mth
2024-05-23 06:52

I read up to around chapter 156, and honestly, I had to drop it because of the direction the novel was taking. Besides copying parts from other novels out there, what really bothered me was that the author forced the plot too much. For example, the author did everything to ensure Kevin, who is the villain of the novel, survived when the MC tried to kill him (and the MC was very capable of killing Kevin) since he fought more than 20 people at the same time, and only Kevin comes out alive??? And not only does he come out alive, he discovers one of the MC’s extremely important secrets, and if he spreads this secret, it’s goodbye to the MC. So, for this and other similar reasons, I dropped the novel. Of course, there are good things in the novel too. The author did a good job creating the supporting characters and the main ones; I have no complaints in that regard. The personalities of each one are very good, and the MC also has a cool personality. Rating: 7.0.

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

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Thanks for the review.

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