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Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Lv1511mth
2024-01-08 16:04

Amazing work. The writing quality is well above excellent, not too repetitive to feel boring and not too "purple-prose" to make the readers lose interest either.The story development is good, with the pace being a mix of slow and fast depending where it needs to be.The mc is intriguing and has a lot of potential. His motivations are simple and plain yet - to become a Magus. I wonder what it'll become when he achieves his current goal.The world, to be honest, is the one thing that has interested me the most. It's vast and full of all kinds of possibilities, and I can see that the author has a vision in its creation.A 5/5 start from me.

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DayDreamer637
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It's funny seeing you here bro. I thought that Lucas had finally killed the author. . I am going to take your recommendation and read this. Hopefully, it won’t be dropped abruptly

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