A question: Did the author base Johnny English's personality on Mr. Bean? Because I totally imagine that actor when I read, and nothing anyone says will change my mind. Without a doubt, the best character. Kkkkkkkjjj

Okay, I persisted and continued reading the book, and I’m finally able to see the enormous gem hidden here. The book is extremely well done, the MC has matured, although he still has some flaws, but I can now appreciate his personality. What caught my attention the most, without a doubt, were the interactions with other characters. Seriously, I was afraid of reading about a cold and ruthless MC who couldn’t relate to anyone. Many authors make this mistake, making the protagonist only truly interact with his women. But in this book, we see the opposite, where the MC makes real friends and isn’t the typical cold protagonist, which makes the book 100% better. Although there are some annoying things like the out-of-order POV shifts, or how it seems the MC has a 10000000/100 luck because everything seems to go right for him, you end up adapting to these inconsistencies as you continue with the novel and don’t really mind them much. I totally recommend this book.

I see that you like slice of life, and it really is difficult to find good ones of this type. From Modern Family, the only one that really interested me was the one you mentioned. But I'll recommend one that I think is very good; it's also a slice of life, but the main character's dream is to become an actor: "I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)" by BarCalak.

Here's my honest opinion: I only gave it 5 stars because I don't have a definitive opinion about the novel yet, and I don't want to harm the author since it seems to be a very good novel. But I have to say that the beginning is really discouraging, and this is due to the MC's personality. I've never seen a protagonist so stupid. Sometimes I wonder if the problem is with me, if I'm the one who lacks patience for character development, but man, the MC is a reincarnated old man, he knows most of the events, he has an awesome brother (who should be the protagonist), and yet he keeps screwing up over and over. It’s infuriating. It's only the 50th chapter and the protagonist has almost died several times because of his stupidity. When the AI advises him, he says, "Yeah, I need to improve." And in the next chapter, he screws up again!!!!! This is very off-putting for any reader. It's not possible that only I feel this way. I understand that the author wanted to show development, but stupidity has its limits. What the protagonist does is just nonsense. Thanks for reading my rant. :3

I haven't finished reading all the available chapters yet, but just from the beginning, I can tell the story is going to be very good. It's been a while since I read a romance about taming beasts, so I got excited about the title. But, brother author, I have to confess, man, I didn't like the character's image, haha. He looks like an adult child, even has a beard to shave, lol. The AI messed you up, brother, but I liked the images of the beasts.

Dude, here in Brazil, we take everything as a joke, so it's quite common for us to mess around with each other, and double entendre phrases are one of the things we joke about. Here, this is known as a 'breach,' like 'that person made a breach.' Anyway, this is a typical 18+ double entendre phrase.

There I expressed myself poorly, I meant a strong golden finger like the MC's, in addition to his cultivation speed, which is much faster. If you read, you will understand. As far as I have read, the 'master' hasn't taught him anything significant, just gave him some information, something that, in my opinion, he could figure out on his own. And there is another detail: currently, the MC is pretending to be an Immortal Primal who lost his cultivation and is gradually recovering (I don't know much about the power ranking in this novel, but from what is mentioned, it is quite a high rank). So when he accepts a master, it ends up undermining his image as someone who was supposed to be very strong, you understand?

Come on, author, you're not helping us readers, are you? Besides changing the real names of the players, which causes a certain irritation among us readers, you make the MC like a 5-year-old in 2014? Man, by the time the MC debuts in football, all the players will have retired. You totally ruined the readers' immersion, and this makes no sense at all, especially since there are many other well-known novels that use the real names of players and even interact with them, and there were no issues with copyright or anything like that (if that's what you were worried about). But anyway, this novel isn't for me, unfortunately. I wanted to see an MC interacting with real people and not with characters based on other players.

Without a doubt, this is the best recently available fantasy novel. What the author is doing is gold. For those who enjoy an incredibly overpowered main character, this is your novel. The protagonist also has a great personality, which is evolving into an even better one. In terms of power, as far as I’ve read (up to chapter 88), the MC is powerful enough to surpass his peers. I dare say he is currently the most powerful child in existence. The power ranking hasn't been fully explored yet, so it's hard to know how the MC stands in relation to the world's true potentials, but I believe he still has a long way to go, so there's plenty of room for development. The academy arc hasn't even started yet, where I believe he will meet the main character, as so far he has only trained within the clan. From what I can tell, the author has created a vast world with various existing clans. So my rating for this novel is undoubtedly 10/10 so far. I also have a suggestion for the author. I think it would be interesting for the MC to fake his death in the future. This way, he could escape the clan and further develop his sister's personality, who by then will have started to see him as a true brother. It would be interesting to see her POV when she finds out he has died.

I read all the free chapters, and I was disappointed, not because the story was bad, but because of the opportunity you missed, man. When I read the title of the novel and the synopsis, I thought of something completely different, like a romance from that manga 'My Wife is a Demon Queen' (which I recommend, by the way). You got me very hopeful, author. You combined cultivation, a guy transmigrated into his own novel, and a beautiful waifu, all things people love. But it wasn’t what I imagined in my head. So many things happened in less than 20 chapters that I couldn’t understand half of it. Too many events at once. Not to mention the old man who became his master, which, in my opinion, didn’t make sense. If he has a golden finger, he doesn’t need a master. And in less than 10 chapters after meeting the protagonist (villain), they already separated. He went one way, and she went another, even though he is her slave. He should at least follow her. There wasn’t even time for the two to interact, man. Note: I’m giving my opinion regarding the beginning of the book. I haven’t read the recent chapters, so I don’t know if the book is good or bad. Up to where I read, it didn’t interest me, just the title and the premise of what it could be.

Vou ler novamente só pra matar a raiva que sinto do autor por não atualizar essa obra de arte, exijo uma atualização de 100 capítulos quando voltar!

Is the author still writing? I saw this novel about 3 years ago, it was one of the first ones I read, and without a doubt, it was my favorite. And look, I don't even know much about basketball, but the author managed to create such a well-made novel that it got me interested. I was upset at the time when I reached episode 328 and there were no more updates. I saw that there are still a few new chapters, but I'm afraid to start reading them and get attached again since the last update was 5 months ago... If the author were more active, this novel would undoubtedly get a lot of attention here, because after this one, I tried to find others about sports, and I can say that none were as good as this one. If the author is reading the review, I ask him to start updating again! You have a lot of talent, brother. Best wishes.

La ele mil vezes kkkkkkkkjj

Not that Porto is bad, but as a Brazilian, I would have loved to see a career start here. I feel like we are so undervalued. 😭

"The beginning was interesting, but Porto, man? When they started saying that the scout was speaking Portuguese, I immediately thought of Brazil. I've never seen a fic that talks about Brazil, even though it's the country of football, and the leagues they compete in are on par with any other. So many football geniuses have played in the Libertadores for Brazilian clubs—it's incredible. Brazil has had five people considered the best in the world, something no other country has achieved, not to mention the other stars who are playing in top European teams and who are still in Brazil at this time. It would have been interesting to see the MC interacting with the future greats."

I've really enjoyed it so far. Although academy novels are common these days, you can see that the author has made an effort to follow a different path from the others. What attracted me the most, without a doubt, was that the MC doesn't hide. Man, I was so tired of stories where the MC keeps hiding their abilities and pretending to be weak. In this one, even though the MC doesn't show all of their abilities, everyone knows that the MC is strong. Another thing I found interesting is that the protagonist doesn't follow the canon; from the beginning, he’s been messing everything up. This is the kind of protagonist we want to see! The author did an amazing job giving the MC this personality. I was hoping the MC would end up with both sisters, Rachel and Emy, but then I saw there’s no harem. I confess I was disappointed with that part, but I trust the author; he knows what he's doing.

Yeah, man, I believe in you. Take this review as something positive and as a few points to improve on. There are few good fics lately, and you have potential. The grammar was really good, so don't get discouraged.

Brother, I can't defend this fic. It's fine to make the MC a troublemaker and a rebel—it can even be fun—but 11 years old is too much. Not to mention that it's only the 5th episode and the MC is already literally a god, with all abilities maxed out. I prefer more serious fics, where the author makes an effort to create something fun and exciting for the audience. This is just senseless wish fulfillment. I wouldn't be surprised if the MC starts chasing women like Pokémon.

"A log hit my face." This phrase cracked me up, man. Here in Brazil, it has a double meaning; if you say this to anyone, they'll tease you for the rest of your life hahaha.

I'll write this review, but the author abandoned the fic a long time ago. However, if they happen to read this, I would like them to return to writing Harry Potter fics. Although this fic has some errors, the author did a great job with grammar and world-building details. If they did a self-insertion with an existing character, it would undoubtedly be perfect. If you don't mind, I'll list some things that didn't work well in this fic, which might be why some people are dissatisfied. 1. The author included a lot of comedy throughout the story, which is super cool, but in many moments, it was totally misplaced. It ended up mixing a scene that was supposed to be serious with comedy, making it nonsensical. 2. The second issue was the protagonist's somewhat emo personality. I understand it was a character development arc and that he would overcome it (probably in the last chapters), but in various moments he made jokes and in others, he was emo again just a few chapters later. If the author had kept his personality consistent, it would have been amazing. Alternatively, having him go through a trial at the beginning of the fic and then gradually overcoming it throughout the episodes, while also explaining the reason behind it, would have worked better. It's hard for readers to feel "emotional" if they don't know what the MC is going through or has gone through. This was missing here. 3. Harem. What got me in this fic was the senseless harem—Hermione, Luna, Scar. Man, creating a harem in a world like Harry Potter's is extremely difficult. I've only seen one fic where it worked, and it wasn't even a harem, just two girls. So if you want to do it, I suggest having a maximum of two; more than that is overkill. I think that's it, brother. I really liked the fanfic despite the errors I mentioned. I found you to be a very good author. If you read this review, create another fanfic with the same Harry Potter theme, since it's a topic you know well. Try an insertion with an existing character (preferably one who didn't get much screen time, like Harry's cousin, Dudley Dursley). Man, that would be incredible.