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SusshiRoll
SusshiRollLv1511mth
2024-04-01 10:00

Don't let others fool you. It is bad. I'm fine with mtl but at least mtl with some editing, you ain't gonna find any here. This story feels like someone who doesn't know a lick of chinese or english and mtl the story. As for the story development and character design. I could have sworn these types of stories went extinct in China. It is what you would expect from the early Webnovel days, all face slapping no substance. All the MC the second he gets his system, he becomes greedy and dumb, the entire personality of the MC and all characters in the novel revolves around "young masters" and face slapping. the moment the MC and his family get into trouble, everyone turns coat on them and when they beat said young master and co they all began believing in them again.

Clan Leader: My strength equals to that of the entire clan

MoBei is MoBei
3.9
643 Chs

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ExamPL3
ExamPL3Lv15

Translation quality- The translation quality is quite good but there are some problems with the name for realms switching for a few chapters and the fact that some characters are not properly gendered as the translation switches from she to he. Even so, it is understandable and doesn’t majorly disrupt the reading experience. Updating Stability-The author posts at least a chapter a day and is consistent. Story Development-The novel has a lot of time skips and focuses more on the development of the clan rather than the adventures of the main character. I think it’s quite good as it shows what’s going on and leads properly into time skips. It also makes it more realistic. I do wish that there was more time spent on characters but that is likely a result of the rapid movement of the clan. Overall, very good if you can handle frequent time skips and a focus on wholistic story development. Character Design- The characters are quite good in having some uniqueness and differences but we really don’t get enough time with them to be able to tell how deep they truly are. World Background- The world is designed and portrayed well with a focus on sects and regions of power. The view of the world changes as the clan grows stronger and moves to more challenging areas. Same with this, I would like more time spent on diving into the depths of each area. Even so, each area is unique and has the main character unlocking new and unique things. Overall, don’t expect a masterpiece in character design and worldbuilding, but also realize that the world is very good for what we see of it and that there is still time for the novel to slow down and focus on characters or places. Just be prepared for rapid change. I hope you enjoyed my review. 😁

1yr

Pires_1123
Pires_1123Lv4

Before there was 40 free chapters, now only 25. If this continues, they will start charging from the first chapter.

1yr
Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

Quite n enjoyable read this one. MC has transmigrated over and fuses with the host, he is the dominant person of this fusion (nothing is heard about the original host), inheriting all his memories and emotions which is rather novel as often we hear of these transmigrated MCs who pick up memories and nothing else, so this is a plus. The story develops in a way that through his family growth he gains the combined growth and initially believes through more family he can grow faster, however the system at a later stage reminds him having many members of the family will not generally be best and instead develop his current family to a greater extent, which again is also rather novel in not having upteen wives and concubines etc etc. Overall it is a good growth story, filled with many interesting developments and some intrigue. I find the MC pretty intelligent as he realises the old adage that there is always someone better than him so he develops in a planned and structured manner. I scored it all 5s bar a 4 for world development as I haven’t seen enough of the story world for a solid 5. Regardless, well worth adding to the library.

1yr
Devil51
Devil51Lv13

Finally some good clan building Genre . .

1yr
Xreylolz_tt
Xreylolz_ttLv3

its AI translate.....!!! rarely find hunman translate in webnovel nowadays.

1yr
maniac_008
maniac_008Lv15

It has a lot of potential but the character of the mc is really too irritating. Whenever a problem occurs, he gives in and keeps finding ways to run away and not face it directly or even try using his brains. What's the point of having so many overpowered skills and items but still being scared all the time and trying to run away. The author cannot have the mindset of having a full clan development story being lowkey style. One or two people being lowkey kind of story is understandable but not a whole clan development one. Where is the respect for a clan leader if he keeps giving in and trying to run away whenever a problem occurs.

1yr
mukilan_manimaran
mukilan_manimaranLv2

quit enjoyable novel ............... ........ .... ................................. ..................................

1yr
Pumpkaboo
PumpkabooLv13

An isekai story where the original host wasn't killed off?! This is my first family system type of reincarnation story. MC inhabits Ye Fan's body and rooms with the original soul. Where is the soul? No idea. It's there, I assume somewhere. You'll have to read it to find out. What I like about this story is that the MC is OP but not at the same time. He isn't arrogant about his strength: he knows when to show his strength and when to retreat. I enjoyed the the female characters' development, especially Ye Xiaoxiao and Ye Jinqiu. One awakened her inner yandere and the other is a mini ogre XD

1yr
DarkHold
DarkHoldLv3

The novel is very interesting, I really liked it. I advise everyone to read it.

6mth
manimaran_mukilan
manimaran_mukilanLv2

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