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maniac_008
maniac_008Lv151yr
2024-02-29 12:37

It has a lot of potential but the character of the mc is really too irritating. Whenever a problem occurs, he gives in and keeps finding ways to run away and not face it directly or even try using his brains. What's the point of having so many overpowered skills and items but still being scared all the time and trying to run away. The author cannot have the mindset of having a full clan development story being lowkey style. One or two people being lowkey kind of story is understandable but not a whole clan development one. Where is the respect for a clan leader if he keeps giving in and trying to run away whenever a problem occurs.

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akhil_Roy
akhil_RoyLv1

Well author want that lowkey tag in its full glory 🤣🤣🤣

AllhailTrump
AllhailTrumpLv1

Well he runs away cause the enemy is stronger than him , he knows he can't beat enemies 2 to 3 levels above him . Mc isn't stupid he prefers low profile and does it in moderation and although his family gets insulted he makes a comeback making the ones who insulted or underestimated his family look like clowns . Plus Mc is progressing quite well right now . My only disagreement about this novel is later on the interactions between the characters becomes bland and Mc progress way too fast like he's on a rocket and his battles become fewer and fewer . The novel is good till around he moves to immortal realm it gets real boring from there. Also the Translation is bad 4/10 the system prompts at this point are is utter garbage i can't even tell when these random missions come up and just go with the flow .

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ExamPL3
ExamPL3Lv15

Translation quality- The translation quality is quite good but there are some problems with the name for realms switching for a few chapters and the fact that some characters are not properly gendered as the translation switches from she to he. Even so, it is understandable and doesn’t majorly disrupt the reading experience. Updating Stability-The author posts at least a chapter a day and is consistent. Story Development-The novel has a lot of time skips and focuses more on the development of the clan rather than the adventures of the main character. I think it’s quite good as it shows what’s going on and leads properly into time skips. It also makes it more realistic. I do wish that there was more time spent on characters but that is likely a result of the rapid movement of the clan. Overall, very good if you can handle frequent time skips and a focus on wholistic story development. Character Design- The characters are quite good in having some uniqueness and differences but we really don’t get enough time with them to be able to tell how deep they truly are. World Background- The world is designed and portrayed well with a focus on sects and regions of power. The view of the world changes as the clan grows stronger and moves to more challenging areas. Same with this, I would like more time spent on diving into the depths of each area. Even so, each area is unique and has the main character unlocking new and unique things. Overall, don’t expect a masterpiece in character design and worldbuilding, but also realize that the world is very good for what we see of it and that there is still time for the novel to slow down and focus on characters or places. Just be prepared for rapid change. I hope you enjoyed my review. 😁

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