You have managed to create a novel that not only caught my interest, but expanded upon it throughout the story. I've written a novel with Tsunade as my main character for nearly 2 years now, yet I feel that your execution of her character may very well be better than my own. Your emphasis on the strength of Fuinjutsu is something that exemplifies the mystical nature of the Uzumaki Clan, and a Kekkei Genkai that gives command over shadows is way too underutilized in most fics. I've added this novel to my Library simply because it deserves it. Excellent Job.

I am currently reading chapter 130, and all I can say is that this is one of the best novels I have read on this platform. there are a few issues at the start, but the author just keeps getting better with every chapter. the story has new ideas that are quite different from the usual Naruto fanfics. I would happily recommend this book to anyone.

There are two/threeish main aspects, which if you can look past would make this a really good story. 1) MC becomes OP extremely quickly with no explanation (the most the chapters have is a few years later). 2) The MC also creates and just randomly finds OP stuff that would make anyone super strong but the author is just adding random elements to make the story more suspenseful, even though it shouldn’t be with all the stuff the MC has done for himself and his family. Most importantly: 3) The chapters feel like the author used chatgpt to artificially make each paragraph/sentence longer for no reason. I can understand the first few chapters, but in every single chapter there is so much unnecessary filler. Some parts are even repeated again later in a slightly different way. I honestly believe without the filler, each chapter would be half as long.

I think this Story ist good, at least at Potential. Sadly Its very hard to read... I don't No why things like this isnt being adressed often, but the "poetry" is way too much. We are reading a Webnovel, not a poem. Instead of making the story good, it just wastes it. Like, there are so many details and desceriptions, there is barely any story in it. Not my Cup o' tea Mate. So... yea, sorry for ma' little rant there, I just think Its a shame, really. Cheers.

Reveal spoiler

mc can use yang yin chakra beofre he can graduate from academy.where is the training arc.as he didnt get any wish from god he is just normal people in naruto.so he at least should struggle doing things like that.and merging two chakra nature idnt that easy if that was easy orochimaru would have all the genkai by himself

It was honestly a great story until they nerfed everyone including the MC to create the hyuga event. Don't know why you make folk so powerful if you want events to play out like this. Another story fallen into mediocrity. definitely was going to join the pat reon til that happened.

A unique story. An oc Nara that's basically a genuis/prodigy with monstrous never-before-seen talent and bloodline. Characters are fleshed out fairly well, plot is coherent and worldbuilding seems to be great. Powerful levels are semi-defined, which i love. Overall, a great story. My critique for now is how the reactions and behaviours of some characters don't necessarily match my expectations of the actual characters in the actual anime. But i guess that's why this is a fanfiction.

I liked everything about the book. From the way the mc and others gain strength to the way some powerful things are obtained. The characters are realistic and the world doesn't stagnate during an important event. The way seals are shown makes them intresting and connects them to the danger the uzumaki clan posed that lead to it's destruction. Lastly the fact that HIruzen undestood his mistakes yet unable to correct them entirely by getting rid of danzo shows his weak character and the loyalty to tha vilage that overpowers everything...