There are two/threeish main aspects, which if you can look past would make this a really good story. 1) MC becomes OP extremely quickly with no explanation (the most the chapters have is a few years later). 2) The MC also creates and just randomly finds OP stuff that would make anyone super strong but the author is just adding random elements to make the story more suspenseful, even though it shouldn’t be with all the stuff the MC has done for himself and his family. Most importantly: 3) The chapters feel like the author used chatgpt to artificially make each paragraph/sentence longer for no reason. I can understand the first few chapters, but in every single chapter there is so much unnecessary filler. Some parts are even repeated again later in a slightly different way. I honestly believe without the filler, each chapter would be half as long.
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It’s because some of these authors, like this one, use AI to write fanfictions.
thanks for the heads-up, saved me time. I can look past the first point but not the other two.
I'll play devil's advocate here, how do you know that he is using it? The author admitted somewhere that he is using it or do you just think he uses it? not only this platform but also others. I'm seeing comments like this more and more "Must be done using AI", seems thats the new way to low-blow without looking crass
the conclusion I've come to for when people say it must be ai, is the repeating paragraphs. it has been especially prevalent these past few months I've noticed that fanfiction especially have a paragraph describing how, for example, the Mc gets out of bed, stretches and eats some breakfast. yet the next paragraph portrays the exact same thought, and yet it will have several noticeable differences. like the first paragraph will say he stood up and stretched his legs, bit the repeating paragraph will be saying something similar, but yoy can easily see the increase in writing capability and the usage of far better and advanced words than what was originally written. that's what I've gleamed from these comments myself so I could be incorrect entirely who knows lol
Viste como te vacila ajajaj, usó chatgpt para largar la respuesta de bot que siempre usa en las reseñas, ya sabes que muy buen autor no es
