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behem0th
behem0thLv61yr
2024-02-13 21:22

the premise of the story is interesting and so far the developments pretty good but for the grammar and spelling... I've read raws and mtls with better sentence structure

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Beginnerghost04
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First try. Novice. Not expert in English.

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