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1emanresULv11yr
2024-01-15 10:37

The author's lack of understanding of grammar and his lack of familiarity with English made me unable to get through the first chapter. You will have a much easier time enjoying this fanfic if English isn't your first language.

Warhammer 40K/HP The Warp Debacle

Descentofpotential
4.7
48 Chs

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Descentofpotential
DescentofpotentialAuthor

Hi there if you've noticed any errors I'd be more than happy to fix it if you identify where one was I write this on my phone so it won't be perfect.

1yr
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LegateMattius
LegateMattiusLv15

I never realized how badly I needed a HP and 40k crossover with Harry as the MC in my life until I read this. The author is doing a good job, I've been enjoying it a lot so far.

1yr

Arion_Sturmklinge
Arion_SturmklingeLv2

I love this story, the idea, the setting and especially the writing style

1yr
Psyzone
PsyzoneLv1

I'm really enjoying the book, it's nice to see the middle of the book expanding and I'm looking forward to how you'll integrate the two dynamics though I expect it to be quite the challenge.

1yr
IngisRattus
IngisRattusLv5

This is one of the 2 best ff about 40k i've ever read, unfortunatelly, it's... dropped?, anyway, pretty well narrated, perfect adaptation and fusion, i love it .

2mth
Mike_Davis
Mike_DavisLv14

Just super new and cool premise. Really enjoyed it so far.

1yr
Indra_lord
Indra_lordLv4

highly recommend. 👍

1yr
Vin_sham
Vin_shamLv1

Sick, is all I can say it truly a fun read, parts actually get your adrenaline pumping. Plus 40k Bingo Bango couldn't ask for anything more.

1yr
Alexander_Statham
Alexander_StathamLv1

Not words really just this story is unique, I think the author should go use there skill and write an original fantasy novel or go write the next Rick and Morty, just the right balance of craziness, action and attention to detail.

1yr
aiden_rivera
aiden_riveraLv4

it's not my cup of tea but it's a extremely good story and has a interesting plot that is well written

1yr
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