Descentofpotential

needs character consistency also you're, writing it very inorganically, he does this then he does this. Characters should react, do this because of this, which then causes this which is important because of something we will discover 4 chapters later.

Much better ending than the show, and likely a better ending than the author will put out.

if you do it needs to be at least 20 + chapters ahead. if you delay to build up you will lose your momentum if you already have that ready id do it

bro you missed the peakest ending, it brought tears

This book is very well researched and is the alternate history the Christian world deserved. It's believable and the ending is so peak, just trust me.

Disgustingly peak content if there's not a sequel i will march in the streets.

tftc

gaslight, gatekeep, girlboss