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2024-02-06 23:38

well i still like the first part of the story even though I hate the fact he chose a katana as his weapon cause it was already over used still I tolerate it and read it what I'm disappointed is about the world travelling after all there are many things more to discover in jjk world to make him stronger I'm not against the world travelling part as I could understand that it has a connection to his ability but I think you should finish the jjk first before travelling to another world after all introducing another power system when you didn't even finish the jjk story took the thrill of reading this and I already know what will happen to this book in my experience in reading most cases of authors using plots like this just ruined their novels and dropped it just thinking this book like a chimera where other power systems being stitch together lose my expectations from this book

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Fr, i hate world traveling most of the time, i can understand it for worlds like naruto, since thats been overused like crazy, but jjk has so much potential

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