Item: Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System
Rating: 1
Author: Fjdjjfjsjiwos

FjdjjfjsjiwosLv311mth

2024-02-07 22:28

Anyway, I'll leave it here, thanks to the brave man who read the novel and gave us this information. If you liked what the author did in this novel, then you can't call yourself a man. Unfortunately, the author does not seem to be able to respond to comments, I would like to know what problems with his head made him write this in his novel.

Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System

AllenWorker

3.7

386 Chs

Liked by 55 people

Replies25

MajidX200Lv3

thx

11mth

AllenWorkerAuthor

Sorry, I will modify this part of the content. Currently in contact with editors to handle it😭😭😭

11mth

FjdjjfjsjiwosLv3

If I offended you in some way with my words, then this was not my goal. It's just that my emotions are unstable right now, so I might flare up. In fact, this part with Yuri, tent@cles and mind control of the girl reminded me of the style of Japanese hent@i, and as we know, the Japanese are the worst people in terms of their fetishes. Also in my profile somewhere there is my comment that describes why I hate Yuri so much, if you're interested, you can read it. Well, thanks for the answer.

AllenWorker:Sorry, I will modify this part of the content. Currently in contact with editors to handle it😭😭😭

11mth

BeyondTheLawLv11

11mth

Arcane_SeerLv3

What bro you save my day today

10mth

ChthonianPrimogenLv1

Seems hot tho...but ig it's each to their own

10mth

Venerable_AdamLv4

Did you remove it I won't read before you do also bro don't do it again

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10mth

Sin_of_GREEDLv14

the tentacles are main issue for the readers

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BrownCentoreLv4

Is it fixed now

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9mth

Spirit_ImmortalLv4

check out..... blood Warrior Harem ...just once if u don't wanna have regrets... remember me

Fjdjjfjsjiwos:If I offended you in some way with my words, then this was not my goal. It's just that my emotions are unstable right now, so I might flare up. In fact, this part with Yuri, tent@cles and mind control of the girl reminded me of the style of Japanese hent@i, and as we know, the Japanese are the worst people in terms of their fetishes. Also in my profile somewhere there is my comment that describes why I hate Yuri so much, if you're interested, you can read it. Well, thanks for the answer.

9mth

Spirit_ImmortalLv4

check out..... blood Warrior Harem ...just once if u don't wanna have regrets...I'm the guy whose screen shot is in review comment

BeyondTheLaw:
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Spirit_ImmortalLv4

check out..... blood Warrior Harem ...just once if u don't wanna have regrets

Sin_of_GREED:the tentacles are main issue for the readers

9mth

Spirit_ImmortalLv4

check out..... blood Warrior Harem ...just once if u don't wanna have regrets...nah as far as i know

BrownCentore:Is it fixed now

9mth

Sin_of_GREEDLv14

plot looks dragon blood warrior

Spirit_Immortal:check out..... blood Warrior Harem ...just once if u don't wanna have regrets

9mth

Spirit_ImmortalLv4

it is ...

Sin_of_GREED:plot looks dragon blood warrior

9mth

Spirit_ImmortalLv4

bro check out my novels.....

Fjdjjfjsjiwos:If I offended you in some way with my words, then this was not my goal. It's just that my emotions are unstable right now, so I might flare up. In fact, this part with Yuri, tent@cles and mind control of the girl reminded me of the style of Japanese hent@i, and as we know, the Japanese are the worst people in terms of their fetishes. Also in my profile somewhere there is my comment that describes why I hate Yuri so much, if you're interested, you can read it. Well, thanks for the answer.

9mth

Spirit_ImmortalLv4

bro check out my NOVELs 😀

Arcane_Seer:What bro you save my day today
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Spirit_ImmortalLv4

no he didnt't.....since it's a translation ONLY .... check out my NOVELs

Venerable_Adam:Did you remove it I won't read before you do also bro don't do it again

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Spirit_ImmortalLv4

no.....check out my NOVELs 😀

BrownCentore:Is it fixed now

9mth

Buay_ButlerLv14

Trash

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Other Reviews

HC_PwnographyLv11

Reveal spoiler

11mth

Reality_King4everLv15

I like this is there any more like were MC makes a city in a apocalypse and only women are allowed in that are his harem and has lots of seggs

1yr

Forlorn_WendigoLv15

It's evident from the outset that the author lacks survival skills, evident in the constant errors made to fulfill power fantasies. The only consistent element is the dedication to the author's fetishes, which seem disconnected from real-life experiences. The erotica is notably poor, particularly due to the absence of consensual encounters on top of the recurring theme of deflowering women. The dialogue lacks realism, suggesting a disregard for female agency while simultaneously reflecting the author's fragile ego. While certain aspects of the content may appeal to some, the author's fixation on personal fantasies neglects the reader's enjoyment. Despite potential perceptions of the author as cultured or myself as weak-minded, the reality is far from it. As a war veteran from a prestigious military unit, I've experienced diverse situations, but this narrative lacks realism and adventure, offering little appeal. Ultimately, this is subpar erotica and a poorly crafted fantasy, likely conceived by an immature individual lacking the talent to create compelling narratives. Regarding recommendations, "Debauchery of the Village Chief" offers degeneracy within a story, while "The First Hunter" provides a compelling apocalyptic survival narrative. Both are preferable alternatives to the presented content, which lacks authenticity and quality.

9mth

webnovel433Lv13

Before you decide to start reading go take a look at chapter 118 and 119 sigh...

11mth

FamilyManLv3

Reveal spoiler

1yr

ertrision88Lv2

The main character is black, if you like this kind of degenerate novels go for it, it's not my case at least. Besides, interracial relationships are unpleasant, even if it is with Asians or blacks.

10mth

DaoistHerbzLv6

Boring. The MC's brain is on his 🍆 He acts like a teenager full of hormones. ಠಿ⁠_⁠ಠಿ

9mth

Spirit_ImmortalLv4

no YURI here big HAREM 😁 only thing bad is that MC previous gals get overshadowed

11mth

MajidX200Lv3

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