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2024-04-01 20:37

It's evident from the outset that the author lacks survival skills, evident in the constant errors made to fulfill power fantasies. The only consistent element is the dedication to the author's fetishes, which seem disconnected from real-life experiences. The erotica is notably poor, particularly due to the absence of consensual encounters on top of the recurring theme of deflowering women. The dialogue lacks realism, suggesting a disregard for female agency while simultaneously reflecting the author's fragile ego. While certain aspects of the content may appeal to some, the author's fixation on personal fantasies neglects the reader's enjoyment. Despite potential perceptions of the author as cultured or myself as weak-minded, the reality is far from it. As a war veteran from a prestigious military unit, I've experienced diverse situations, but this narrative lacks realism and adventure, offering little appeal. Ultimately, this is subpar erotica and a poorly crafted fantasy, likely conceived by an immature individual lacking the talent to create compelling narratives. Regarding recommendations, "Debauchery of the Village Chief" offers degeneracy within a story, while "The First Hunter" provides a compelling apocalyptic survival narrative. Both are preferable alternatives to the presented content, which lacks authenticity and quality.

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β€˜Absence of consensual’ this line helped me to save my $. Thanks bro for this review, you saved a poor guy from wasting his money .

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