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Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv11yr
2024-01-19 13:49

boring sharingan powers (reality manipulation you have seen it done 10 times), mc monologues all the time, mc goes on a spiritual journey about his fire style ninjutsu and now he can use weird golden flames without hand signs. which brings up a larger point of the author just not being canon accurate. he randomly gets his mangekyo as soon as he enters the world at like 5 years old. but the biggest downside is the cringe writing, the author likes to make the mcs monologues read almost like a depressed 16 y/o girls poetry book

Naruto: Sasuke's Resurgence

TaleDrifter
3.8
53 Chs

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Tigre_Negro008
Tigre_Negro008Lv2

I dropped it because it's simply not possible to remember a reincarnation story where the MC doesn't become part of the world, he isolates himself and only thinks about returning to

6mth
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TaleDrifter
TaleDrifterAuthor

Hey, Author here with a shameless 5 star review for himself. If you haven't guessed already this is a novel about our MC reincarnating as Sasuke just after experiencing the Uchiha Massacre. The chapters probably seem quite small... well they are. Usually hovering around ~700 words, I've tried making the chapters longer but the quality just drops by a disgusting amount. I mean, I am constantly editing these chapters, so who knows if they could become longer in the future. However, future chapters should probably be between 1000-1500 words as there will be a lot more to write about there. Also, this is my first ever Webnovel. So I would really appreciate it if you guys help point out things like plot-holes, lacking character development, too many info dumps etc.

1yr

DvD_007
DvD_007Lv5

started already quite badly, mc with identity issues. bs reality bending powers. dumb mc.

1yr
Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_CharlesLv11

we're starting out but we can already see a lotta potential. love Sasuke fanfics and this one is starting out really strong.though I'd advice the author get a cover picture up and running asap, cause at this moment that he's mass releasing is when he has the chance for people to notice the book the most. And people on wn just naturally gloss over books without a cover picture as it's seen as a sign of amateurity or the author not being too serious with the book

1yr
Daoist730sPk
Daoist730sPkLv1

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1yr
Victor_7740
Victor_7740Lv14

This entire thing seems to be written by an ai… everything seems robotic from normal conversation to description of places or events. Author use fancy, and formal words in informal everyday conversation of different characters is rlly weirding me out. Other than that the plot and the pacing is rlly well done. So ig if u can try to ignore the unnatural and robotic feel of the writing then it’s pretty good

11mth
sumur_murni
sumur_murniLv1

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8mth
broke4753
broke4753Lv2

it's great 💯💯💯 Man do more chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

8mth
TIFOEL
TIFOELLv1

Так как фанфик упавший я снижаю оценку, а так твердая 3,5 была бы. Отдайте кому то для написания или перепишите сами

11mth
Rhandson_D
Rhandson_DLv1

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