Item: Eternal Temptation: Awakening Sinful Desires
Rating: 4.4
Author: Chris_Gill

Chris_GillLv158mth

2024-06-04 05:41

Quality is good. The story is good and entertaining. I had a problem with a few things, one where we get extended background and cut scenes for characters that a minimal affect and fhe cut scene could have been skipped. Second is the mass intoduction of characters at the sect brings the progress to a halt. My last is the extended fluff and repeated extended descriptions of already introduced characters. I am talking of chapters that are 1/2 to 2/3 of fluff with progress of 2 or 3 sentences. We had a whole secondary story of a play the MC was watching for 4 or 6 chapters. I ended up just skipping the play and didn't lose anyrhing to the actual story.

Eternal Temptation: Awakening Sinful Desires

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