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Slow_downAuthor1yr
2023-12-05 01:26

Shameless Author Review: I hope you enjoy my story, and I'll do my best not to waste your time with a dull plot. Character arts are available on Discord. Please give Votes and Reviews. Thank you!

Eternal Temptation: Awakening Sinful Desires

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4.8
375 Chs

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Syahola
SyaholaLv2

It has been uploaded for how many days has this novel been uploaded?

1yr
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Slow_downAuthor

I am uploading chapters now. And I have been writing this story for only a week.

Syahola:It has been uploaded for how many days has this novel been uploaded?
1yr
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Slow_downAuthor

I have decided to not add Yuri.

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Ironrooster36
Ironrooster36Lv4

Questions: Is this MC your standard japanese-type of MC? Is there Yuri in the harem? If not, please don't include any of that inside of the harem.

1yr
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Slow_downAuthor

No. Asher is not the Dense protagonist in my story. There is no Yuri in any way.

Ironrooster36:Questions: Is this MC your standard japanese-type of MC? Is there Yuri in the harem? If not, please don't include any of that inside of the harem.
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Slow_down
Slow_downAuthor

No.

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Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Hm. How many days did it take your book to get a contract? Do tell me.

1yr
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Slow_downAuthor

I wrote an application on the 8th Dec and finished signing on the 18th.

Lord_Azathoth:Hm. How many days did it take your book to get a contract? Do tell me.
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Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Thanks. 👍

Slow_down:I wrote an application on the 8th Dec and finished signing on the 18th.
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V_S242005
V_S242005Lv13

so what kind of harem are we talking about here ?a huge harem of 30 women or a small onepersonally prefer the small one .as the size increase value of each women also decreases till I just don't care about the harem

Slow_down:No. Asher is not the Dense protagonist in my story. There is no Yuri in any way.
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Slow_down
Slow_downAuthor

The main harem will be only a small one. but he will have many encounters with others.

V_S242005:so what kind of harem are we talking about here ?a huge harem of 30 women or a small onepersonally prefer the small one .as the size increase value of each women also decreases till I just don't care about the harem
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shinu316
shinu316Lv14

Just curious have u decided if anyone will get pregnant here?

1yr
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Slow_downAuthor

Not for now. It's just the beginning of a novel. It's still a long way to decide that.

shinu316:Just curious have u decided if anyone will get pregnant here?
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dreamy_charcoal
dreamy_charcoalLv3

How manny chapter did you have at that time

Slow_down:I wrote an application on the 8th Dec and finished signing on the 18th.
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dreamy_charcoal
dreamy_charcoalLv3

Reason check out it's in my dp 😆

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Troxking
TroxkingLv15

I wanted to ask if he'll actually love the girls in his harem, and also if he'll sleep around without adding girls to the harem?

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Slow_downAuthor

yes. he loves them all. as for leaving the girl behind? he won't do that.

Troxking:I wanted to ask if he'll actually love the girls in his harem, and also if he'll sleep around without adding girls to the harem?
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Troxking
TroxkingLv15

Love to hear it, thanks bro!

Slow_down:yes. he loves them all. as for leaving the girl behind? he won't do that.
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ZessDragneel
ZessDragneelLv13

soo a small harem but he will have a lot of flings?? am personally not a fan for flings so wanted to confirm before starting

Slow_down:The main harem will be only a small one. but he will have many encounters with others.
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Slow_downAuthor

No... It would be like a royal harem with the main wives and concubines. And I don't plan to add flings.

ZessDragneel:soo a small harem but he will have a lot of flings?? am personally not a fan for flings so wanted to confirm before starting
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FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

There are too few chapters for a proper review, so I will review it again when there are at least 150+ chapters. Writing Quality: I have not seen any mistakes so far. Maybe there are few, but they haven't been obvious enough for me to spot. Stability of Updates: 2-3 chapters a day is amaizing. Story Development: So far we haven't seen much, since there are only 30 chapters, but so far so good. There is a good twist with him reincarnating in his original world, which I haven't seen before and find interesting. There is a lot of potential there in my opinion, so I am looking forward to it. Character Design: Again we haven't seen much so far, but there aren't any red flags so far. The characters have to be fleshed out more. The first villain (if you can call him that, since he got dealt with pretty fast) was well written, since I really wanted him d*ad when reading about him, so job well done there xD. Main character and FLs have to be explored more for me to give opinion. World Background: Nothing much known because we were busy with MC's revenge. This is probably the one thing that we least know about so far, and I hope it gets expanded soon. Overall it has good start and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. Don't expect an extremely serious novel, since there are a lot of lemons, so read it if that's what you're looking for.

1yr

Black_Reaper13
Black_Reaper13Lv13

I would like to comment on my point of view. 1. The truth is I didn't understand very well about the astral nexus core, is it a dimension? or something similar. 2. and I would say that until now he has focused more on looking for women instead of training his techniques or increasing his cultivation level and I say this because most people complain that he does not advance the plot. 3. but well so far I have liked how this is developing and I hope there is a balance.

1yr
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

What are you waiting for? Go read the book.

1yr
Derek_Lagace
Derek_LagaceLv12

story was good up to were I stopped I liked how the orphanage was saved by the mai n Character

1yr
Anim3God69
Anim3God69Lv14

so I've been reading this novel for about a month started reading it on a free trial and have slowly been using my free passes to keep reading it. This novel is a great read perfect balance of character development plot and the Gentlemanly stuff. MOST READ!!!!!!!

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Scarzz
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1yr
LAZY_ANGEL
LAZY_ANGELLv4

so far it's good enough for me, I can't review it since it has only 19 chapters needs more chapters but so far it's good.

1yr
_in_darkness
_in_darknessLv3

I liked this Story so far. It's Good. Keep it up. 👍[img=recommend]

1yr
_Shadows_
_Shadows_Lv3

Good start and Lemons are interesting.[img=update]

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