Well I got to say that the writing In this novel is good but it’s like the author trying to put difficult words and it never gets to the point mc keeps talking in his mind a lot which just makes the story boring the mc doesn’t even talks about anything interesting this novel it’s like a book that goes on and on about nothing and the difficult words just make my head hurt the author should minimize the words and put things that are interesting i don’t want to read something that the mc is not doing but is thinking about it well i give this a 2/5 it’s not that bad if your smart but it’s really not my type
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I didn't understand what this review was trying to showcase, but after reading a chapter I got it. The words just don't flow, it reads as if every sentence is it's own statement which is due to the overuse of periods fragmenting the structure of the story. in spite of this i really like the concept, im going to try and catch up and see how you improve.
