I’ve never given a fan fic under 20 chapter a review but I felt this was so good it needed one. Summary: The MC has a good personality, mostly self interest orientated which I like…Decently smart and isn’t a robot that just follows his system. The system is very simple and minimal meaning it has a small role in the story. He is a weaker version of Dante which I find the best choice cuz the potential for growth is very good and if the author started with the devil transformation Dante then he wouldn’t be able to use a lot of the characters in Marvel cuz their simply too weak…. Also his power ups aren’t ridiculous like one one day he’s 10x stronger, it’s more realistic and leaves u excited for the next one… The writing quality is very good and the side characters have their own traits and personalities and don’t feel like fodder… The pace is kinda crazy at the start cuz the author wanted to show that the MC is a small fish in a big pond, so I feel it has to slow down now a bit( as of chapter 19)… All in all a very good fan fic and it has the potential to be one of the best marvel fan fics if the author keeps on the right track.
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