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_Pochitalover_
_Pochitalover_Lv210mth
2024-01-05 02:18

Totally nerfed Dante stuck in stupid situations, a slow plot, stupid main character with a nasty personality and random events. Recommendations: Get everything out of the way that is of no interest (anything to do with SHIELD, Hydra and other government organization nonsense, if you put a Devil May Cry character in Marvel you don't put him in those situations, it's stupid). Give the protagonist a personal goal (he wanders around the story totally aimlessly and killing people, generic edgy, even Dante from DmC: Devil May Cry has more personality, which at first seems impossible). Increase the strength of the protagonist being faithful to the original character (In the most recent chapter the protagonist was afraid of Wolverine, WOLVERINE, ONE OF THE WEAKEST X MEN, even the weakest version of Dante with no arms and terminal cancer easily destroys Wolverine). Give more structure to the plot (everything is very random, there is no defined arc and characters come out of nowhere that in the next one don't appear again and plots are opened that remain later in the air).

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Solare_The_First
Solare_The_FirstLv4

Thanks for the warning dude, even the weakest version of Dante rolls through Wolverine no diff.

_Pochitalover_
_Pochitalover_Lv2

Yeah, it's not worth it, I keep reading it to keep my habit of reading the first 30 chapters of a story so I can leave knowing it's not going to get any better at any point, but I'm currently on chapter 21 and it's going nowhere, long update times (between 2 to 3 days) for short chapters that advance absolutely nothing in the plot, basically a fly trap for a few fools to consume the author's patreon and keep releasing countless short chapters that advance nothing, only interactions between marvel characters with the protagonist that are very long and not very entertaining.

Solare_The_First:Thanks for the warning dude, even the weakest version of Dante rolls through Wolverine no diff.
ChaosFeedz
ChaosFeedzLv3

thx for warning. and it doesnt help the image of this novel after reading similar reviews and then i see so many reviews that are from the same people and are all 5* if not for these bot spam 5*'s the rating would be 3* or less lol

Gopal_Bohra
Gopal_BohraLv4

bro read 15 chapters and got tired bruh

AshburnDz
AshburnDzLv13

nah he's right, super nerfed dante. Trash story.

Gopal_Bohra:bro read 15 chapters and got tired bruh
Gopal_Bohra
Gopal_BohraLv4

he ain't it may be a bit version but I have read the whole thing and the fight choreography is amazing and if you think about it like this is the redemption for the remake dante not main line dante and he does get stronger after a bit but if it was main line dante at full strength there would be little to no progression as even in dmc3 dante was lightspeed he is too strong for there to be an interesting story and this isn't main line dante it's the remake one

AshburnDz:nah he's right, super nerfed dante. Trash story.
wororrin
wororrinLv1

i guess - WN strikes shadow ban on your comment... anyway

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DiabloRedfox
DiabloRedfoxLv13

Gopal_Bohra:he ain't it may be a bit version but I have read the whole thing and the fight choreography is amazing and if you think about it like this is the redemption for the remake dante not main line dante and he does get stronger after a bit but if it was main line dante at full strength there would be little to no progression as even in dmc3 dante was lightspeed he is too strong for there to be an interesting story and this isn't main line dante it's the remake one
truedevil
truedevilLv4

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Curios_Theories
Curios_TheoriesLv1

Que carajo w que haces aca XDDDD

_Pochitalover_
_Pochitalover_Lv2

Qn sos pibe?

Curios_Theories:Que carajo w que haces aca XDDDD
Curios_Theories
Curios_TheoriesLv1

Soy yo edua pendejo jajaja recomiendame una historia que ya casi no te veo en el grupo

_Pochitalover_:Qn sos pibe?
_Pochitalover_
_Pochitalover_Lv2

No sé pa, definitivamente no leas esto, es la cúspide de lo edgy y mediocre, relleno de Naruto, con trama parecida a una novela china donde el protagonista es sumamente molesto, no sé loco, léete Crepúsculo o algo así.

Curios_Theories:Soy yo edua pendejo jajaja recomiendame una historia que ya casi no te veo en el grupo
Curios_Theories
Curios_TheoriesLv1

Si con solo ver que es mal a de tu parte es suficiente jajaja, en fin alguna chida que hayas visto recientemente?

_Pochitalover_:No sé pa, definitivamente no leas esto, es la cúspide de lo edgy y mediocre, relleno de Naruto, con trama parecida a una novela china donde el protagonista es sumamente molesto, no sé loco, léete Crepúsculo o algo así.
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