Hm... okay? Can you give examples? Maybe which characters and how? Also, perhaps you stopped very early in the novel, because the characters get explored one after the other.
LeoderoDantlianLv1
I agree with his statement partly. The stroy is great and honeneslty phenomenal . World building , actions and dilogues .It's true you stretch out things but I understand the reasoning . My only issue is the behavior of the Mc. His truly too wimpy and at times too pathetic . You say "please understand his a 16 year old in another world" but in reality. No 16 year old behaves like that . Even the loners and anti social ones. I understand the author isn't 16 years old but try to truly imagine a 16 year old. After 300 chapters no 16 year old is this pathetic especially around women. It's like he acts intentionally against the norm. I just read 325 and for some reason you make this deeper than they truly are. His awkwardness is understandable but no one is that awkward. Him keeping Rykls a secret isn't something that requires him to tell his crush. If you truly want to continue being deep than just simplify it to "everyone one has secrets and that's fine" because that's how it really is. He doesn't need to act so awkward he doesn't need to cry over the things he does . The only thing I'd get why he would need to cry for is the first time he killed someone but he should be fine afterwards because it's necessary he had a skill that could help him [dead calm] but he chose to turn it off . Which my gawd it pissed me off cause that skill would have solved this issue. Using the "skill will change him" is not gonna cut because that should apply to all skills. I mean didn't Billy change as a whole when he got to this world ?. I'm at the point where I hope his summon was right about the darkness he has because I'd rather have edgy and cool over pathetic and awkward. It just feels more sensible .I don't mind explaining further but,
1 like I said big fan and I'm liking the novel it's just sometimes I get to a scene and the Mc is acting so patheic I end up skipping and not even caring about the scene which I feel like crap for doing because in the end no author likes to have his time spent writing a scene or chapter to be skipped. I feel like I'm doing you a disservice
2. I'm not expecting him to be a gigachad or anything .Just normalize him . Or let [dead calm] take its role in the story
3. I feel like I've ranted enough. I'm hoping chapt 330 onwards will make me think damn the auther fixed this patheic behavior or something like that.
Magecrafter:Hm... okay? Can you give examples? Maybe which characters and how? Also, perhaps you stopped very early in the novel, because the characters get explored one after the other.
Jamal_Udin_2728Lv1
author...I think most of the main characters in your novels are pathetic.😣
Magecrafter:Hm... okay? Can you give examples? Maybe which characters and how? Also, perhaps you stopped very early in the novel, because the characters get explored one after the other.