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Sameer_Bajpai
Sameer_BajpaiLv28mth
2024-04-29 00:52

1-> Overall poor writing. 2-> Boring MC vs Protagonist/Antagonist Fights 3-> Lame MC (too much self loathing to appear vulnerable and then being cold about other things) 4-> Gods & Memory BS 5-> MC isn't likable

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JECU
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1=The writing is good and easy to understand 2=The MC is not boring because he's trying to be himself and the author said he can't write fight scene but he did a pretty good job 3="Weakness disgusts me" He hates himself for being weak and not protecting his parents when he was 9 y/o and he's cold to everyone because everybody bullied, humiliated him and refused to help.... Ohh and he had to watch his crush getting killed by her father when he was 14 y/o... Then Vestron used him when he wanted to die and #his grandmother# made his childhood a living hell because of a vision/premonition she saw... 4=[img=faceslap] IT'S A FANTASY 5=[Protagonist? Antagonist? I reject both] The title said it... You can like or hate the mc because He wasn't made to be liked but to be RUTHLESS[If they like the MC, it's because they're life was closely similar to MC... and if they hate the MC, it's because they think life is a fairytale]

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Lollipop1337
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Started for good and ended for bad (at the time of 224 chapters). In the first few chapters, the main character was really doing what he was supposed to be doing, but as the story went on, the less attention the author started to pay to it all. This makes it seem like he's just another protagonist who wanders around the world doing all sorts of things. Okay, if only that, but as the plot progresses, the intelligence of our hero falls exponentially, and logic and began to go out for a smoke (for example, high-level martial arts experts can not think of holding their breath so as not to die from smoke. And there are tons of examples like that). Also, cultivation seems to be purely for show. No one will tell us what the differences between the levels of cultivation are, what their features are, etc. They just are and that's it. Get over it. That's the reason why gg doesn't level up, even if he has enough points. He doesn't level up just because. The author tried to give some sort of explanation, but it was some random throw-in rather than anything clarifying. There's not much to say about the world structure. We were given some basic information at the beginning and that's it. Don't expect any more details. The characters, as befits the genre, are cardboard. It seems that the author is trying to create drama (which, more often than not, is out of place) to make the reader empathize with the secondary characters, but alas, everything looks rather artificial and dry. The only one who shows any character and is "alive" is our hero, but it's also very bad. We are shown his personality and beliefs based on a lot of plot holes. There were moments when he had a real way out of the situation, but at that moment his aikyu has fallen to a negative value, and he does not take advantage of all the opportunities only to then stand pompously in front of the mirror and argue about the fact that he is too weak. And that kind of thing, to me, looks very ridiculous and inappropriate. Because of which you simply do not believe in the growth of our hero's personality. The combat, by the way, is as dull, boring and uninteresting as possible. When I got to the ongoings, I actually flipped through whole pages with the description of the fight, so it was tedious to read. And the villains and main characters are just one plot hole.

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