The problem of this novel is the lack of order in the publication time of the chapters, since the author is ahead in Pateroon, there is no reason for not publishing the chapters here.

The rest of the novels you wrote are not even close to this in terms of art, I doubt you can even write again like this masterpiece.

So you are a beta male who is gay؟؟😂🤔

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I think that his mother wants to force his sister to kill MC. I think that MC should also influence his sister. When he becomes strong, he will kill his mother.🤔

The whole season could be told in one line😐

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I don't know why, but I think that MC should kill his mother so that he can save his sister. In any case, I hate the drama. I hope the author doesn't include it in the story.

At the time of the attack on the village, no one knew that Gaara was a Jinchuriki, but now Fujin knows and saw Gaara's face, why did Gaara come to the exams again?? Wasn't bringing a Jinchuriki to the enemy village a red line?

A beta MC that all the women seem to want to jump into and all the men want to MC their wives to. This novel is complete nonsense, it's a waste of my time

Why does the author act like a virgin tsundere girl? It seems that anyone who says any objection to his novel gets angry quickly

I think the author has two solutions. 1 Create a brotherly and sisterly relationship without a shrine. 2. To make a harem but with less than two or three FL members

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MC is stupid, no one will accept a chip into his body. I expect a lot from the novel. I hope the next chapters will be better.

I'm disappointed not only that he didn't kill this woman, but that he should call her a boss😮‍💨😔

The writer should kill this woman, MC should take revenge on her in the future

A really annoying gold digger woman who is attracted to MC, what a cliché

I expected more. I thought he would sterilize his brother and blind his sister. I thought he was too soft for someone who almost died.👀

After reading this novel, I feel sick and my eyes burn. This MC is by far the silliest of them all. It's a predictable story full of bad drama. I had high expectations for this novel, but the more you read, the more you feel MC's stupidity. I feel MC has masochistic tendencies. What kind of evil is this? He is just making sacrifices and helping others. The role of the system in the story is hypocritical and annoying. The idea of ​​this novel was great, but it was ruined )( translate)