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tedmosby201614 minutes ago
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This was perfect. I hate lemons
So, last night was different to say the least, as I found myself getting some sleep later than usual. The food and...everything else hit the spot, taking my mind off the many thoughts constantly clashing in my head. A hunter's stamina was nothing to laugh at
Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
Games · Adui
tedmosby20166 hours ago
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asian authors..
After a whole lifetime, I've met you again… Perhaps this is fate, our destinies rewinding like magnetic tape, placing us two once again at where we first encountered. Melodious music slowly began playing in his soul; every single note so pleasant and beautiful to listen to.
Rebirth Of The Thief Who Roamed The World *_*
Action · Brayon101
tedmosby20167 hours ago
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Seeing that the main body wasn't acting recklessly out of hatred, the shadow clone became interested.
A Hyūga's Gate Between Worlds
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
tedmosby20167 hours ago
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The shadow clone, though filled with frustration and resentment, still suggested that the main body take a more cautious approach and lay low in the One Piece world for a while.
A Hyūga's Gate Between Worlds
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
tedmosby20167 hours ago
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Before Madara unleashed his Susanoo and Hashirama summoned his True Several Thousand Hands, the shinobi world had revolved around intelligence warfare.
A Hyūga's Gate Between Worlds
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
tedmosby20167 hours ago
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Using clones to add the word count..
"What's your next move?" the shadow clone asked. "Now that you've removed the Caged Bird, the moment you return to the Hyūga clan, any clan member—whether from the branch house or the main house—who activates the Byakugan will immediately see that you're no longer bound by the seal."
A Hyūga's Gate Between Worlds
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
tedmosby20167 hours ago
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This fanfiction is so bloated
Take, for instance, the twin brothers Hiashi and Hizashi.
A Hyūga's Gate Between Worlds
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
tedmosby20167 hours ago
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"As your clone, I am created from your chakra. I am also bound by the Caged Bird. And since clones disperse after taking a certain amount of damage…"
A Hyūga's Gate Between Worlds
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
tedmosby20168 hours ago
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Rosinante no longer concealed himself. Dispelling the clone technique, he reverted to his original form—Tanaka.
A Hyūga's Gate Between Worlds
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
tedmosby20169 hours ago
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A bloated mess. A single scene takes 10 chapters. The MC talks in a roundabout way for maximum word count. You get exhausted reading the MC explain himself constantly unasked.
A Hyūga's Gate Between Worlds
Anime & Comics · Malphegor