is good but i hope you will not add harem in the story because the harem thing usually make author lost focus it will end up bad somehow....................

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This story has an interesting beginning, at first I didn't give it much consideration because I thought it was a common fanfic, but I quickly realized that it is underestimated, the plot has character growth and many interactions with well-constructed characters, in addition to the skills of the system and the actions of the mc are very well thought out, of course it has some holes, but I consider them necessary because from my point of view, they are not important and perhaps they will be more recognized in the future, the truth is that this fanfic deserves some 400 chapters because of how good and well created it is

Honestly this is mediocre at best. The English is not very good and the protagonist and characters feel like lifeless cutouts. The protagonist in particular has no clear noticeable trait other than incompetence and lack of mental fortitude and thought.

Novel will probably be dropped soon. Considering the Overpowered MC, inconsistent Power set, and abilities from all over the place, This story will get harder for the author to continue.Also, from the Way the words and sentences are used, one could see it the writings of a newbie.It's good, considering he's probably a beginner who's out to have fun writing a whole new story, but down the line, even he himself will get bored or confused on how to go forward.The most off putting aspect of this is the World Traveling. When I saw him leaving the Marvel world, I simply dropped the book. It ain't worth it

It started good then I became a multiple MC story when he created all of the clones and I just couldn't get myself to continue the story with all the interactions with the Marvel characters through clones

it's a brain dead fanfiction . too much useless details the MC is overpowered yet useless. the story is anywhere but marvel . there is no story development as main marvel universe hasn't gone anywhere it's just world hopping. I tried to be generous rating this.

The book is missing alot of details The book is missing world details Everything just jumping from point to point Everything feels rushed But still good overall

The English is broken. The punctuation and grammar is complete garbage. Character and system details are not consistent. The system itself is a hussy as well. --- Basically, it's a train wreck whose only redeeming feature is the ideas behind the story.

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