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2023-12-06 22:27

some bad points. the story sometimes becomes unnecessarily complicated. like him explaining the components of the Laser weapon. it just needs to be believable that he can make a laser gun out of a car. The grammar has to improve and it has to be more interesting. Chapter 1 is very good grammatically and is interesting because it is not that complicated. Just remember that this is just my opinion. and this is more constructive criticism than anything else.

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harsh07
harsh07Author

thanks for the review I appreciate your effort and I will keep working on my grammar please keep pointing out my mistakes in future

harsh07
harsh07Author

I'll try to improve my grammar as fast as possible 😊

_DEKIM_
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πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘

Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

he thinks its being over complicated but i really like it when things are explained, unlike that dude i appreciate what you did and am excited to start reading.

harsh07:thanks for the review I appreciate your effort and I will keep working on my grammar please keep pointing out my mistakes in future
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

yo author, not much of a dc fan but i heard that she was r*ped or something, is that true in this novel or what? also is there gonna be romance in here, gotta be honest with you i really dont want there to be romance in this novel so i want to know before hand to be prepared. thanks for answering in advance

harsh07:thanks for the review I appreciate your effort and I will keep working on my grammar please keep pointing out my mistakes in future
DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14

who? there's a lot of DC characters who've been raped or close to it.

Ireallylikereading:yo author, not much of a dc fan but i heard that she was r*ped or something, is that true in this novel or what? also is there gonna be romance in here, gotta be honest with you i really dont want there to be romance in this novel so i want to know before hand to be prepared. thanks for answering in advance
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Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

poison ivy

DeejaeSutherland:who? there's a lot of DC characters who've been raped or close to it.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

clarrification, i was referring to poison ivy.

harsh07:thanks for the review I appreciate your effort and I will keep working on my grammar please keep pointing out my mistakes in future
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