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Black_Reaper13
Black_Reaper13Lv1310mth
2024-02-17 08:52

I have to say that until chapter 152 and I am quite immersed in the story, on a personal level I would like the protagonist to use some weapon to give it style or to make him look more dominant, maybe a sword, dagger or spear and although the most common ones, well, in personal taste are the best, the way in which xian yan is dense with his feelings also keeps me in suspense and I hope he realizes what he feels, the writing is good, although I would like to know more about the background of the world of the magicians and Noah's current world and also knowing about his past as a wizard god and finally, author, thank you for writing this novel and we are not supporting anything here as a reader.

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Broken_Dude_789
Broken_Dude_789Lv3

harem?

Black_Reaper13
Black_Reaper13Lv13

Until chapter three hundred and eighteen he still has not accepted Xin Yan or Elysia's feelings, it may take time, you would have to see the privilege chapters to know.

Broken_Dude_789:harem?
Black_Reaper13
Black_Reaper13Lv13

Yu Ming and Ruo'er are possible love interests but there has not been any interaction, maybe in the future, but I don't have much hope for Ruo'er since she is in love with Long Tian and wants to wait for him.

Broken_Dude_789:harem?
Broken_Dude_789
Broken_Dude_789Lv3

Umm THANX I will wait for them to confirm before reading and I'm broke..

Black_Reaper13:Until chapter three hundred and eighteen he still has not accepted Xin Yan or Elysia's feelings, it may take time, you would have to see the privilege chapters to know.
Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

so basically this story isn't actually a harem story? it sounds like it's a Japanese harem story and the mc is surrounded by women, but never actually does anything with them.

Black_Reaper13:Until chapter three hundred and eighteen he still has not accepted Xin Yan or Elysia's feelings, it may take time, you would have to see the privilege chapters to know.
Anitimesc
AnitimescLv14

There is almost 500 chapters and Noah is still using long Tian body When willhe get his own body so he can finally make Xin Yan and Elysia his waifus He is only in the foundation realm after 500 chapters with the speed he is going it will take like 5000 more chapters before he reach the top of the world to make a new body dont know if I can read much more without him gettin*his own body and accepting Xin Yan and his sugar mommy feelings specially with how long it will take him to get to the top of the cultivation realm

_Demon_King_
_Demon_King_Lv11

Why is his cultivation so slow, I didn't expect this. and also is the son of heaven dead ?

Anitimesc:There is almost 500 chapters and Noah is still using long Tian body When willhe get his own body so he can finally make Xin Yan and Elysia his waifus He is only in the foundation realm after 500 chapters with the speed he is going it will take like 5000 more chapters before he reach the top of the world to make a new body dont know if I can read much more without him gettin*his own body and accepting Xin Yan and his sugar mommy feelings specially with how long it will take him to get to the top of the cultivation realm
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Odayaka
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GeneralDeFartos_L
GeneralDeFartos_LLv4

A clumsy attempt at writing a novel. Don't get me wrong, I liked the concept and I've been waiting for it to get more chapters before reading, but now that I've read about 50 chapters I'm just disappointed and dissatisfied. It has a unique interesting idea and throughout the story you can see what the author wanted to characters to be like. (Like how MC can do things impossible to do with qi cultivation or how a green haired mommy is a playful sugar mommy) The main problem with this story: 1- Exposition is not done properly. Author doesn't know what to give more information about and what to skip. Noah basically has no personality here while his previous body owner has a set personality, or how author kept using flashbacks at the start, or how we have no info on the Mage god Noah, or how we got too many useless info about irrelevant things. this is mainly cuz author doesn't know how to properly show us what he wants us to see. 2- Characters have messed up personalities. It feels like author just wants to add scenes he read in other works and wanted to have them attached to certain characters. (Noah is supposedly ruthless but acts kind to who he wants to. But here everytime he acts he's either flirty or teasing and when he has his moments it's not that cool, It just doesn't reflect an old man who's filled with wisdom.) (There's also mommy, she's supposedly mature, but she got over her sons death and gets blushing by Noah from day 1, there's no development, she's still getting over her loss, why would she feel a tingle in her heart just from some kindness? She's not naive, she's mature. So it doesn't make sense.) The relationship and feelings they feels towards each other just feel forced. 3- Author is dragging out what could be over and done long ago. He's adding new enemies just for the sake of it. A lot of elements here are pointless and don't add to the story. Dear author, think thoroughly before adding pointless drama and pointless info, would any of this be relevant after 30~60 chapters? I think not. It's just for added drama, but that just makes it as boring and cliche as other cultivation works.

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